Oooh, this one is tough. I have to pick two. Because this is the best line I think in the whole story:
Just looking at him provided answers to questions before anybody asked them: No, you could not run fast enough; No, you did not have a chance.
But then you know I also love this, and in fact totally adapted/stole the idea for my story:
He noticed, but did not acknowledge the healthier rhythm of her internal organs.

Author's Response: You are awesome on a level scientists don't even have a way of measuring yet....That line might have inspired yours, but you made it brilliant and unique with a talent that is 100% yours.

"Here," he grumbled. A turkey sandwich in the staircase.
That morning, Logan had drowned a man in a drainage ditch.

Two lines. Twenty words (I counted) that brilliantly summarize everything about Logan's character in this story -- soft-hearted and lethal -- a stark, combination, shocking in their proximity, one line snuggled up against the other. Very few writers can pull this off to any degree and yet you make it seem so effortless. I'm so jealous it ain't even funny...Chapter 4 awaits... --Wendie

Author's Response: "Until I'm good/strong enough." was supposed to be end of the last sentence in my previous reply. But again: text limit. Wendie, you are >insert all the good adjectives, and throw in a hug<. I've happy-danced enough to permamently scar anyone watching. Have you ever tried to type while fist pumping the air? Thank you.

You're doing one hell of a good job at setting the atmosphere in this story. I almost feel dirty after reading about the tenement. And the repeated "Here..." section where he gives her food is brilliant; really gives you the feeling of time passing as they encounter each other over fast food bags.

Good job! My only criticism is proof-reading - there are omitted words here and there, and one switched word (I think you intended 'shoulders' and wrote 'soldiers', and that smells like a spell-check error).

Author's Response: Thanks a billion. I wish I could hug you right now. And the typos are completely 100% my fault. My beta is amazing, but I can't expect her to catch everything with me rushing her through it. Are the mistakes only in the third chapter? I will re-edit it when I post the next chapter, because my beta works hard enough.(Said beta is looking over my shoulder and would like me to add that she is very pretty). Have a nice day!

*Loves*

Author's Response: >hugs< Gracias.

Ah, sweet. I was planning on saving this for tomorrow but that resolution only lasted... Bout seven hours of filling my head with distractions. Another well written chapter Rose my dear. Always leaving me wanting more.

It's a lovely poetic style you have. Very nice, a god among insects if I do say so myself. :P

Do hurry. And do not make me to use the hostility of caps lock. You provoke it by making me wait.

Author's Response: Next update...Monday or Tuesday. Sorry! But I'll do my best to make it a long one. Anything to avoid the horror of caps lock....I can't begin to enough for this review. >hugs tightly<

I like the start of this one. Its an interesting twist. A familiar premise of Logan taking care of Rogue, but I don't believe I've seen anything quite like this one before. Good job, keep up the great work.

Author's Response: A thousand thank yous would not be enough. Im glad you like it.

Is it odd that I had no problem eating while reading the first part of this chapter? I'm considering what kind of person that makes me...

"She'd known girls (plenty of them), girls raised on curse words instead of lullabies, girls who couldn't read but whose eyes had learned too much before they were six years old." A heartbreaking, but astute description.

" Just looking at him provided answers to questions before anybody asked them: No, you could not run fast enough; No, you did not have a chance." Loved, loved, loved this description of Logan! So true and worded very nicely! I think the Logans you tend to write are my favorite Logans :)

And I just want to formally say welcome to the coffee club. You'll be addicted in approx. 2 days so please feel free to drop by one of our meetings. Just look for the group of sunglass-wearing tweakers, clutching coffee cups & laptops huddled in the shadow of a Starbucks.

Author's Response: It makes you an awesome person as far as I am concerned and I am very pleased to hear that it didn't bother your digestive tract. (The caffeine has worn off, but Ive gorged myself on episodes of The Big Bang Theory...thats only funny if you've seen the show. If you haven't, ignore everything in these parenthesis). Thank you uber much. >hugs< Want some of my cheesecake?

Fuck it..... I tried so friggin’ hard to bypass - kept my eyes trained on the ‘complete – NO’ kept them there for ages but they betrayed me, couldn’t/wouldn’t overwrite the actions of my fingers that happily clicked away to start.

So here I am and I guess we’re off again on another journey – one I know will be well worth it in the end but why do I have to be so damn impatient? It’s painfully frustrating!! There’s also the fact that it’s not good for a grown woman to have to beg and plead but then again this is a brilliant beginning (no surprise there) Logan is as he should be, loving his version of revenge, your descriptions, the setting, the way you introduced Marie, his internal conflict, the not knowing why, the questioning of himself and the gentle build of interactions.

Sooooooooo.....Please update this ASAP.....pretty please.....promise of cake/choc/alcohol/naked wolverine (delete to you taste, or keep all!)

Hmmm.....very nice......(sorry drifted off a bit at the thought of the last one)

Great stuff as usual x

Author's Response: Lol. Im very grateful for the lack of control over your own fingers... You can beg all you want, I wont tell anyone. ("Hey Sahara! Just what Litlen just did!") Thank you a billion times; Ill write as fast as I possibly can and hope to see you around these parts again.

Damn I wanna feed her too... I'd drown her in food... hell I'd adopt her.

can't wait for more

Author's Response: Lol. Im sure she would appreciate that.

$5 for an apple??? what a bloody cheek. xXx

Author's Response: I know, right? It's redonkulous. ;D

I'll buy you a coffee, just keep it coming. I want them to get together soooo badly.

Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!!!!! Next update will take a week...but thanks to all these wonderful reviews I think (hope. This product comes with no guarentees). it will be a long one, with much more Rogan interraction.