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[Report This]Date: 10/18/2011 4:08:48 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh, the wonderful tension. Love it love it love it. Love how Logan's torn and fooling himself into thinking that he really doesn't care. Wonderfully done. One minor point: watch out for switching tenses. Or maybe it's a typo. The sentence 'The girl studies him, visibly weighing her options' suddenly went present instead of past. Other than that: oh, I really need to read more! (Don't mean to offend you and I hope you don't take it that way?)
Date: 01/03/2011 8:54:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
Okay, I have two for this one too:
But Logan was accustomed to others stuttering in his presence, and easily made the translation from Fear-Speak to English.
and
Upon his return, Logan took the girl's food and consumed it in three slow, childishly defiant bites. Fuck her.
Author's Response: >super mambo tight hug<
Date: 12/22/2010 5:33:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
I love how Logan is getting attached even though he doesn't wanna admit it to himself...Yet he knows the answers.
How about One Eye in the shower with a bottle of shampoo with Nair in it? Honest mistake if he grabs what he thinks is the right bottle, especially if both are in the same shower.
Linda and My Wolvie Muse
Author's Response: HA!!! If you're on WRbeta, you should totally post that foof bunny. Bet you'll have lots of takers.
Date: 10/03/2010 6:55:45 AM Title: Chapter 4
"...more than an open bottle of Nair.
I actually had to stop reading at that point and wait until I stopped laughing so hard that I couldn't see for the tears in my eyes...With the possible exception of nail polish remover, is there a more chemically noxious smelling substance than Nair...to say nothing of the Samson-like fear Logan must have of losing ANY of the hair on his body to such a product, perhaps at the hands of some scorned Delilah...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
As for the rest of the chapter, once again, as with 'Heal Over', you have expertly crafted Logan's reluctance in responding to 'the girl' and his gradual caving in (what was that about the last pebble before the avalanche?) as well as his rationalization of the whole process.
Oh, and by the way, I started kicking myself for not reading this sooner somewhere around Chapter 2...The only way I can forgive myself is to plow on...Chapter 5, here I come... --Wendie
Author's Response: Even nail polish remover is more subdued than that horrific product. I'm resonably sure it's inventor was a terrorist. Trying to summon Armageddon one sniff at a time. Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 08/05/2010 10:27:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
cant wait til next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2010 9:43:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
NO.NO. NO NO NO NO NO. I don't want to wait a week! I want it now! I couldn't stop reading this. Its great! I cant wait to see what other things are in store for both the girl and Logan.
Author's Response: Lmao!!! Im sorry to torture you, and so happy you like it that much at the same time. The updates are a week apart because it take me a week to write them. I manage about three pages a day, at best. And the night before Im always scrambling to finish! So its not like Im holding out on ya'll-I promise. Thanks a million. It feels wonderful to read that at the end of the day.
Date: 08/03/2010 11:11:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
Have I told you yet how much I enjoy the way you structure this story? The way Logan's selfdeception drives the story is really natural and flows very well.
Author's Response: >hugs really really tightly< Thank you; Im so glad you think sn
Date: 08/03/2010 8:50:17 PM Title: Chapter 4
"Logan dreaded them more than a kick to his testicles, more than Scott Summers singing, more than an open bottle of Nair." Genuine lol moment. I'm glad I'm not the only one who considered how awful it would be to have super senses around a bottle of Nair. Thank you for making me feel less crazy.
"But he would no longer be bothered by the girl. He would no longer be bothered with her trailing him or demanding food or giving those girlish "thank you’s”." I just love how he's turning everything around & doing his damnedest to convince himself that she's a bother. Other people may not be able to fool the Wolverine, but he sure as shit is good at fooling himself.
"He could cram Singapore noodles down her throat. Make her--make her say those things she'd said before. About him being nice." Is 'aww' the appropriate response here? Because that makes me want to go 'awww'.
This gives me warm fuzzies. Warm Logan-shaped fuzzies. I will cuddle with them. It will be fantastic. Thank you.
Author's Response: Oh, I think its awful to have NORMAL senses around Nair. That crap is terrible! >gags<....This review made me stare at my screen for about ten minutes with a huge, completely idiotic grin. Thanks, Sahara.
Date: 08/03/2010 7:34:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
The way you so vividly describe side characters is amazing!!! The cashier one I could see in front of me. Keep it up. He is going to find out
that she is a mutant, right?
Author's Response: >launches, hugs wildly< Im so glad you liked the cashier. Thanks so so so much. But no spoilers!
[Report This]Date: 08/03/2010 5:39:17 PM Title: Chapter 4
ooooooohh... xXx
Author's Response: Lol...Thank yooouuuuuuuuu...
[Report This]Date: 08/03/2010 3:52:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
I could kick myself that I didn't leave a review for the last chapter - I meant to, but I guess I got distracted. Anyway, better late than never!
Y'know, this story is beginning to remind me of a recent series from the Wolverine comic, in which Logan, hiding out in a shabby tenement, meets a young girl - (not Rogue, I hasten to add.) She calls him 'Mean Man' and a kind of grudging respect develops between them, but when she's murdered Logan sets off to avenge her, spreading blood and mayhem across the country. Please don't kill Rogue off in your story, because I'm beginning to like her!
Chapter four - awesome as always! Looking forward to finding out why Marie was missing from her usual place on the step!
Author's Response: Really? Wow. Whats the name of that? Ive never read the comics (certainly not that one;Im no copycat!) but lately Ive had the urge to try them. Especially the ones where on the cover you can squint and pretend he's Hugh Jackman...Mmmh...Hugh...Anyway, thank you!!!! >hugs<
Date: 08/03/2010 2:26:35 PM Title: Chapter 4
I adore this chapter; it comes across effortless and unrushed, and I’m loving the build up. I can’t wait to learn more about Rogue’s background...
Author's Response: Effortless? Heh. Ive nicknamed my notebook "Little astard" and I alternately cuss/sweet talk it and my pen when I get stuck, which is every ten minutes....God I wish that was a joke. But Im so glad it seemed that way! Lol. Thank you!
Date: 08/03/2010 2:12:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
awww You are really tearing my heart out with these chapters! I love how their relationship progresses so slowly but in their way its huge too. Great job! I look forward to the next chapter! In fact I am practically stalking this story looking for an update!
Author's Response: Please, stalk away. I love it. Thank you! The next chapter will show more Rogue-explaination and dialouge between the two.
[Report This]Date: 08/03/2010 11:45:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm really enjoying the sweet Rogan going on, I would love to find out a little back story on Marie in this universe.
Author's Response: Gracias! Ask and you shall receive--next chapter, I promise.
Date: 08/03/2010 11:31:30 AM Title: Chapter 4
Yesssss finally!
more please soon
Author's Response: Lol. 'Tanks. Next update-one week.
[Report This]Date: 08/03/2010 1:10:19 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love how you write Logan, love how he's trying to convince himself everything he does/feels is anything but what it truly is.
The concept/beginning is wonderful and really enjoyable to read, so far its uniqueness is shining through and along with your brilliant style makes this one hell of a fic - keep it up x
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Im having alot of fun with this Logan too. Not as much as Heal Over Logan, but running close.
Date: 08/02/2010 9:35:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
Thank you for providing the scary.
~Mia
Author's Response: The scary? >puzzled, hugs anyway< Gracias!
Date: 08/02/2010 8:00:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
Awww, I like seeing them slowly get closer. :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad.