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[Report This]Date: 10/18/2011 4:29:44 PM Title: Chapter 5
So sad. :( And my husband is calling me because it's time to set the alarm and go to sleep because we both have to get up early, but I already know I'll be thinking of this story a long time before I fall asleep. Thank you for this so far, and goodnight. :)
Date: 01/03/2011 8:57:29 PM Title: Chapter 5
This one's hard, there's so much good description in this one, but I think this one still wins:
"Well," Logan said, in the same manner she was learning to expect from him: as if each word was a precious commodity and she was making him waste them.
Author's Response: >beams in silly, uncontrollably proud way< Thank you!!!
Date: 12/23/2010 5:13:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
Here's what I found...was probably rope, in her eyes.
Shouldn't this be rape?
I thought I saw at least two more oopsies but, I couldn't spot them as I skimmed.
I promise I can go back an do an indepth study once I get through to chapter 18, unless you add more chapters. Hint, hint.
LOL.
Off to read and review more.
Linda.
Author's Response: Okay, no. That one was actually correct.
Date: 12/22/2010 5:59:38 AM Title: Chapter 5
Seems like Logan doesn't know that mutant slave trafficing could be right under his nose.
I found some spelling errors but I'm not so an*lly retentive to point em all out. Unless you want me to.
But I figure it's after 3am, so I'm giving us both a break.
Linda
Author's Response: Oh, yes. Please tell me. Nothing makes me want to bang my head against the wall more than a missed typo.
Date: 10/03/2010 7:16:52 AM Title: Chapter 5
Can a person be angry and heart-broken at the same time, or does one trump the other? And God help her father if the reason she's tired all the time is what I so hope it isn't...Speaking of the Daddymonster, I can hardly wait for Logan to meet that waste of skin...and hope sincerely that 'Biblical' doesn't even begin to describe the method of his punishment...Chapter 6 it is... --Wendie
Author's Response: Is that rhetorical? Because I think the two go hand-in-hand. "Like peas and carrots," as the mighty philosopher Gump would say. >attempting to hug and bounce simultaneously< Muchas Gracias!
Date: 08/13/2010 4:30:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hi there,
You’ve gotten me engrossed in another one of your works, as usual ;). It’s an interesting take on Logan here, his work is a little more nitty-gritty, less glossed over than how I’ve come to associate what he does, but, it’s Logan, I see it, and it works. I think mostly b/c you can see his humanity, what he’s doing resonates within him..and that’s what makes me care. And, poor Marie, I end up saying poor Marie a lot in my reviews for your stories, lol, what happened to her in Heal Over haunted me after I read it, and this has too..so I’m hoping things end up good, or your version of a Rogan good, which works just fine for me. You always have this underlying thread of love and healing in your works, it works so well for these two damaged souls, I just wanted to say you do it amazingly well, with the simplest, subtlest tone..it’s a reading pleasure, thank you.
Author's Response: I know. I really beat the crap out of Marie, don't I? But Im also a sucker for happy endings. :~) Thank you a hundred thousand times. I'm so glad that I could continue to write things that you enjoy. >hugs<
Date: 08/10/2010 7:37:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
This is heart breaking. I love how well you're writing it but it's making my heart ache.
Author's Response: Is it weird for me to say "Im so glad"? Because I really am. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2010 6:42:41 PM Title: Chapter 5
That last line was awesome. Very good chapter. The detail was so spot on that I could imagine creeping through with the level of fear she must live with daily. Excellent work. Please more!
Author's Response: >jumping up and down< Thank you a million, billion, gillion, bagillion times.
Date: 08/10/2010 1:43:15 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh, how do you write something so heart-rending it makes me squirm away from my laptop? (And I mean that as a compliment to your amazing writing). I almost can't bear Rogue's predicament, I want to sweep her away from that awful life and make everything okay. But I guess (hope!) that’s what our hunky growliness is going to do, in his own unique way...? :-)
Author's Response: Squee! >hugs with eyes closed tightly< Im so glad I could make something have that effect on anyone. Thank you.
Date: 08/10/2010 8:14:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
Gawd I hope the Wolverine gets to play with Him *growls*
Author's Response: Me too. ;~) OOH! OHMYGOD! YOU JUST GAVE ME AN IDEA! Thank you!
Date: 08/10/2010 12:41:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
Um, yeah, soooooo..... I really want to read more of this! Please, please, please get a lot of chapters up soon! I'm dying here!
Author's Response: I really wish I could give that to you, but Im afraid every chapter takes me a week to write. >wince< Lol. Im sorry, and thank you for liking it that much.
Date: 08/09/2010 11:34:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
wow. This one was better than all the others! I think I like finally finding out what's going on ;) Don't keep it so mysterious for so long, please!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 08/09/2010 10:00:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
I really like it. Your descriptions of feelings and places always plunge me in the very heart of your characters, living, walking with them hand in hand. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Great work, as always.
Author's Response: Im so happy that you think so. I re-read your words about twenty times. Thank you!
Date: 08/09/2010 8:19:29 PM Title: Chapter 5
"This place was not ashamed of it's bareness, stared you in the face and dared you to challenge it's lack of pretense. Exactly like the man who inhabited it."
"Logan said, in the same manner she was learning to expect from him: as if each word was a precious commodity and she was making him waste them."
Perfectly perfect & dead on. You're ability to capture things like that blows my mind AND rocks my socks. Look at you go :)
Unfortunately what your Marie is going through hits too close to my work life so even though it's so well written, I'm going to bypass pondering those parts & O.D. on Logans instead. So could I borrow your Logan for a bit? Yours is my favorite & I know you need him to write, but I promise I'll return him...eventually...in the same condition...more or less...
Author's Response: Rocks your socks, huh? Kinky. >exaggerated wink<.....Okay, so that was more creepy than funny. Anyhoo, thank you a billion times. Everytime you quote something I bounce. This time, my kitten was on my lap and he wasnt too happy, but I am....Unfortunately, I cannot lend you my Logan. He's very important to me and I'd have to untie him and get him into the car...Its just too much of a hasske. Sorry!
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2010 7:07:02 PM Title: Chapter 5
I just can't get enough of this story. To have that kind of a background, its no wonder that she eventually has a power that literally does not allow unwanted people to touch her. I love Logan's inner conflict. I love how Marie has desensitized herself of almost everything but the barter process. Some things are just more painful than others. if anything, the fact that she can feel such emotion proves to herself that she is a human being and not an animal.
"And the girl fell asleep pondering the week irony of being so close to her home and being homeless, of having a mother and a father but no parents."
I have such empathy for her. This story has seriously tugged at my heartstrings. And Im not ready for it to be over. EVER.
Author's Response: Well, dont worry yet. This story is going to be pretty longish. And I hope you will continue to feel the same way and give such amazing, beautiful reviews. >hugs< Thank you from the lowest piece of organ tissue of my heart.
Date: 08/09/2010 5:39:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
This was overwhelmingly wonderful to read. Just horrific enough that I want to peel the skin off of "His" face. But not so horrifying that I want to boil it and make him eat it. Yet. Thank you in my own roundabout creepy little way.
~Mia
Author's Response: Well, you might wanna put a pot of water on the stove because things dont get much lighter in chapter six. Thank you. Im very grateful for your creepitude.
Date: 08/09/2010 5:06:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
This was heartbreaking. Her mother and father deserve to be punished. And Logan is just the man for the job. Do we really have to wait another week?
Author's Response: 'Fraid so. Thanks a bajillion. "Heartbreaking" is one of my favorite adjectives.
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2010 4:44:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
Sorry for not replying and letting you know the number of the Wolverine comic you asked for, but once again life intruded upon my fantasy world! (We're decorating!!) Anyway, thankfully annie77 sorted out the issue number problem! It's a great story, check it out!
Once again, this was an awesome chapter and I feel hugely sorry for Marie. You managed to fill her back-story with such detail that it was easy to see the grubby little apartment with the mind's-eye and to imagine her horror at what her father has been doing to her. You have incredible talent and I am in awe!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Oh, its fine. I was in no particular hurry. :~) I am so glad you liked the chapter. Thank you, as always, for reviewing. >hugs<
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2010 4:42:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
“Reasonably happy with it, hope you are too” – well, extreme understatement there!
‘(at least, the few she had been unable to avoid going into)’ I love this line, there’s such a powerful message there, a great set up for what we were about to find out. Also loved the end line ‘the irony of being so close to her home and being homeless, of having a mother and a father but no parents.’
Great stuff as usual, loving it all.
Sorry it’s a short one but off on hols tomorrow and it’s past my bedtime - if that means I’m a pansy too then so be it!
Author's Response: >throws arms around you< Thank you so much, and have a great vacation. Wear sunscreen, use the flash button on your camera, and don't eat anything that still has it's legs still attached.
Date: 08/09/2010 3:20:50 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh, poor Marie. D: I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: >hugs very very tightly< 'Tanks.
Date: 08/09/2010 3:20:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
I loved the glimpse into Marie's life. Love Logan's worry about what Marie is thinking. Update again soon!
Author's Response: Muchas gracias. Im really glad you do.
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2010 3:18:41 PM Title: Chapter 5
Really loving this story, please update soon.:)
Author's Response: Thank you, I'll try!
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2010 3:03:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
A++
Author's Response: Thank you!! >waves grade around, jumping in the air.