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Reviewer: annie77 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2010 12:06:00 PM Title: Chapter 6

This was one of my favorite chapters because their relationship is beginning to grow and loved the way you wrote it. But geez poor Marie :( I hope Logan makes it all better. I know you're busy but please update as soon as possible
(this fic reminds me the time I was a Lost fan, and I couldn't wait a week to watch the next episode). thanks!

Author's Response: Logan always makes it all better. ;~) I really wish I could promise otherwise, but the next update will probably be Tuesday. But you never know. >fingers crossed< Thank you. Im grinning very stupidly at my computer right now, and it's all your fault.

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2010 11:32:13 AM Title: Chapter 6

You should be ashamed at leaving us with such a cliffhanger, that said, More Pleeaaaase!!!!

Author's Response: >hangs head< Im very, very ashamed....not really. Im just that mean. ;~)

Reviewer: Ashnan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2010 10:47:11 AM Title: Chapter 6

This story has had my attention from Ch. 1. Each chapter just gets better. Your writing style is wonderful with just the right pace. My only complaint is the wait between updates. You are killing me. Keep up the superb work!! I love this story!

Author's Response: >launches self at you and hugs< You made me bounce up and down in my chair. Thank you.

Author's Response: >launches self at you and hugs< You made me bounce up and down in my chair. Thank you.

Reviewer: notmyself Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2010 10:38:50 AM Title: Chapter 6

That amount of crimson beneath the zipper really worries me. Especially given the tone of danger and the bend of her father character. I'll just go boil some water, shall I? You can decide if it should be used to clean wounds or inflict them.

This chapter was nearly poetic in its stark bleakness. Yet for all its despair and gloom, the glimpse of grudging...something, is beautiful in all its awkward undefined grace. Thank you for the poignancy of your words.

~Mia

Author's Response: I've already heated some water for you. Didn't you see it? If you have enough left over, you can make hot chocolate. :-) Thank you very very much.

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