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Reviewer: DutchXfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2011 2:40:47 AM Title: Chapter 7

Naked Hugh Jackman holding a puppy and eating candy? *lol* I'd love to see that. :)

What a horrible chapter. But in a good way. I need to read more.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2011 9:05:30 PM Title: Chapter 7

Wow, this chapter is so great. I totally had missed the little hint of her mutation the first time I read it, and now reading it for the fifth or sixth time it seems so apparent. Two favorite lines here:
The cashier, a man who kept a loaded shotgun next to the emergency button beneath the counter and used it far more than the latter, seemed too relieved that Logan was not robbing him to protest.
and
He didn't know, at first, who Logan was talking about, and that would cost him. He said, "She was good, man.", and that would cost him more.

Author's Response: That anyone would consider something of mine worth rereading, one time let alone six, is enough to keep my head swollen and my feet walking on air for weeks. That someone of your skill would do so means I'll be tip-toeing through clouds for *months*. Thank you.

Reviewer: WolvieDoesItBest Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2010 6:48:23 AM Title: Chapter 7

OMG... Love, love, love this chapter. I love it when I get to read about Logan taking care of Marie/Rogue because it seems so unnatural to me.
I know that he should take care of his mate as a feral but I don't expect him to be so kind and gentle. I expect that a lot I guess from Marie/Rogue
because I feel she is naturally nurturing. I guess I'm weird that way.

Hell yeah, that f*cker got what he deserved. Next!

Linda and a much satisfied killer Wolvie Muse.

Author's Response: >hugs< Thank you. It's great to wake up to so many amazing, funny reviews.

Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2010 2:49:41 AM Title: Chapter 7

That was great Really, quick and awesome vengance is always fun. And then they emotion is really very bueatiful.

Author's Response: Super mambo gracias!!!!!!

Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2010 12:33:15 AM Title: Chapter 7

Wow.

Author's Response: Yay!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2010 7:53:33 AM Title: Chapter 7

Keep your naked Hugh...you earned him for this chapter...in spades.

So, her mutation rears its ugly head...this should add a few new wrinkles. And you've shown something of a sadistic streak -- a thousand paper cuts on his testicles? If you have any male readers, you just set them writhing in their chairs. Good golly, Miss Molly, OUCH!...Only three more chapters and I'll be all caught up... --Wendie

Reviewer: jnet Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2010 11:45:28 PM Title: Chapter 7

God this story just gets better and better. I hurt so bad for her and him. But I hope they can help each other out and find a happy ending at the end of all the strife and struggle.

Author's Response: This was a beautiful way to start my morning. Much better than coffee. Thank you!! (...And I've got about...two pages to go before I start typing up the next chapter.

Reviewer: Ransom99 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2010 4:06:49 AM Title: Chapter 7

Okay... I had promised myself that I couldn't touch this story till it had been stamped with my favorite word. COMPLETE. And this is killing me...

But hey. I lasted three chapters without reading before I gave in. And what a treat it was. Falling into this world was wonderful. Very well done my dear. Absolutely brilliant. And that seems like an understatement.

Might I say, I don't come across many stories that deserve a 10/10?

Author's Response: Okay, so ummmm....Marry me? Lol. I can't even begin to describe how great this was to read. I bounced until I gave myself a headache. Thank you thank you thank you!

Reviewer: SummerSky Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2010 2:58:14 PM Title: Chapter 7

You left me shaking after reading this it was horrifing in a you made me feel like i was there wanting to take them where bad things don't happen. But the part that made me cry was Logan telling her 'it's okay' even after she fell asleep. To get another chapter i'd give up a naked Hugh Jackman.

Author's Response: It's aweful of me, but I'm bouncing of the walls with the idea that I could make anyone say that. Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!! >exclamation point to infinity<

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2010 2:09:38 PM Title: Chapter 7

I was so excited when I received my alert for this amazing story. I couldn’t wait to get out the office, get home, and absorb myself. And I was not disappointed, it was worth the agonising wait. Although I was not quite prepared to have my heart broken. Again. How do you do that??!

“He didn't know, at first, who Logan was talking about, and that would cost him. He said, "She was good, man.", and that would cost him more.” – perfect ‘Wolverine-esk’ thoughts.

So, could I opt for the naked Hugh Jackman? Could you possibly send the real thing rather than a photo? If so, could you also assist with a suitable explanation to give my poor hubby?

:o)

Author's Response: Once they perfect human cloning, I say we nominate Hugh as the first subject. Everyone should have their own personal Logan. >lost in fantasy for several minutes< And a personal you, because your reviews are unbelievable. Thank you; you made my day...btw, its doesn't count as cheating with Mr. Jackman. Just offer him the same forgiveness if he ever finds himself in a room with Halle Berry.

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2010 6:32:10 AM Title: Chapter 7

This was...Terrifying...but masterfully written, as usual. Scuse my poor spelling. More.

Author's Response: I don't care about spelling, its the beautiful sentiments that count. Thank you!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2010 5:58:38 AM Title: Chapter 7

A picture of naked Hugh Jackman?

I'll take that one ;)

... or just the next chapter.

Author's Response: How 'bout both? :-D

Reviewer: Wolverette Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2010 5:35:43 AM Title: Chapter 7

I must have been holding my breath through most of this chapter because when I finished reading I let it all out in a rush. That was a seriously awesome chapter - such a terrible thing has been done to Marie and yet you handled the situation with such tenderness. You have never written Logan better than in this chapter - honestly you should be proud of yourself.
And yes, I'll take the offer of the naked Hugh Jackman! Forget the puppy and candy though - I've got cats and a too-fat husband!!

Author's Response: >wild screaming & jumping up and down< Thank you. This was wonderful to hear. Your Hugh is on his way.

Reviewer: litlen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2010 2:12:01 AM Title: Chapter 7

Now then, my mind wandered whilst reading - if her skin was going to manifest because of pain/horror/self preservation I would have thought that it would have come to life with a vengeance during the attack and not begun weakly after – were the ‘no’s’ and the ‘I don’t want’s’ her way of warning him what could happen or just her panicked and scared over what he could do to her? I think I’m on the side of wanting her to be able to control it, but if she can why didn’t she? You know the worst part?.........................I have to wait to find out!

Great chappie as usual and at the risk of repeating myself.......Logan’s emotion battle has me so hooked to this story, bless him he really hasn’t got a clue how far he’s fallen. Trying to do the right thing, *wanting* to do the right thing, not having a clue what was the right thing (when it came to Marie) and then we have vengeance/justice and Logan’s back at home with himself and knowing exactly what to do and what is ‘right’. Btw loved the ending of this one, took us back to the beginning and tied the whole chapter together.

Keep it coming, you have us all pulling our hair out wanting to know what’s going to happen.

Author's Response: I wish I could answer you without giving anything away. I can only promise that everything in this chapter was intentional. :~) Thank you for being so thoughtful! >hugs<

Reviewer: Silvereyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2010 1:03:27 AM Title: Chapter 7

It's frustrating when reading this story simply because of the thought 'I have to wait another week for another awesome chapter?! WTF?!' And sure, send me a naked Hugh Jackman... I don't need the candy... but naked Hugh and a puppy... cute and hot all rolled into one! YUM!

Author's Response: Im very glad you think so, and your personal Hugh is in the mail. Muchas Gracias.

Reviewer: annie77 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2010 12:27:29 AM Title: Chapter 7

I must admit I had to re-read previous chapters to get into the story again. But don't worry I can't stay mad at you, after all you're writing one of the best fics ever!

Now, this is just my humble opinion but I wouldn't mind a bit if Marie could already somehow control her mutation here. I just think this story works great without the angst and frustration of the untouchable skin, but thats just me

Thanks for this one and please update soon! (I can't take another 15 days without an upadate!)

Author's Response: Awwwwwwww!! I love you!.....I know what you mean; I've never liked writing about her mutation. Such a pain in the ass. :~) But since it's unavoidable in this one, Im trying to rework it a bit Thank you a bajillion times, and I will try very hard to post the next chapter on time. >hugs<

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2010 12:23:25 AM Title: Chapter 7

ooh...Naked Hugh Jackman holding a puppy and eating candy... YUM.

But seriously. The only thing that could redeem you in my book is if you somehow get a mad spark of inspiration and blast out 3 more chapters this week. Because a story this damn good can't possibly be allowed to be put on hold for lengthy periods of time.

Author's Response: Lol. You have no idea how badly I wish I could do that. Thank you! You're awesome.

Reviewer: Solidae Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2010 8:06:46 PM Title: Chapter 7

Poor Marie. This is so good! Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: >hugs< Thank you so much.

Reviewer: Shuttlelauncher Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2010 7:02:45 PM Title: Chapter 7

I'm soooo hoping that other guy gets his just deserts! This was so heartbreaking but so good. I really hope you update this one soon. I can't wait to see marries powers come out and how they deal with it together. Thanks!

Author's Response: THANK YOU!!!!!! >very tight hug< I really appreciate this.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2010 6:53:58 PM Title: Chapter 7

OMG.. Make me want to cut those bastards up myself why don't you? That is just awful what was done to Marie. Love Logan for is fear for her and his caring. Totally loved him cutting that guy up. And hmm... I noticed that we are finally seeing a little of Marie's mutation. I wonder if she is controlling it or if it is only just manifesting. I can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Yay!! Im so delighted to hear that. Glad you like it. Thank you sooooo much.

Reviewer: notmyself Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2010 6:45:04 PM Title: Chapter 7

Thank you for the retribution violence and for the promised violence to come. It was a gorious (pun intended) beautiful mess. I am extremely oddly relieved to know what happened, sort of. Even though it was worse than what I had thought. The mutation pull is also relieving and extremely encouraging. I was slightly thrown by the description of a bottle cap ring in her foot. Did she step on the rim of a broken bottle trying to get away? Was it forcefully inserted?

Thank you for all of this. Late or not.

~Mia

Author's Response: Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou. That really means a lot to me. (And she stepped on it. I might clarify that later).

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2010 6:18:02 PM Title: Chapter 7

"She submitted to him with a few tremors and a watering of eyes that couldn't imagine any more hurt, but couldn't hope for anything else." Heartbreaking. I simply loved this line.

"He wanted to bury his face in her neck, say "It's Okay" until his throat gave out." I think I had the same heart problems Logan is experiencing in this chapter when I read this line. This made something inside me hurt. I envy your ability to put sentences like this together.

As I said in that email, totally worth the wait. Except this time you delivered 186% percent (yeah, that's those numberz again....with a z, don't forget).

As for the naked Hugh holding a puppy & eating candy...well yes, yes that would be much appreciated. It'll go in the "MANimals" calendar. Which month though?

Author's Response: Why not all months? I could totally spend a year looking at naked Hugh. For this review, and your beautiful skill with numberz, I'll put fifty stamps on his package and make sure you get it by tomorrow. Don't forget to check your mail box. If you don't find our man, it means he chewed his way out of the box.

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2010 5:23:30 PM Title: Chapter 7

You weren't kidding about is being dark! But you forgot to say how brilliant it was.

Author's Response: I genuinely awed outloud at this. Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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