Can we go to Hooters, pwetty please. They have good hot wings and hockey... Hey I'm just askin'.

Don't listen to him. Nobody goes to Hooters for the wings.

But she said, Anyhooters...

Back to my review... I loved how Logan tried to be so tender here. Just wondering why he didn't call Ice Queen Jean? If Xavier kept any tabs, maybe she could mysteriously show up.
Oh... If she's the Ice Queen maybe Bobby should take her to his Senior prom. They'd win King and Queen easily.

Linda and a horny Wolvie Muse.

Like I said over on the other site, this is an amazingly awesome story. I just love how you write - your style is so easy, yet incredibly descriptive - some of your sentences bring actual tears to the eyes. God, I wish I could write like this!!
I love your Logan to bits - he's so manly and grrrr - but then Marie brings out his softer side so well and this is where you really excell. Their scenes together are nothing short of perfect.
Keep writing, 'cos I'm hooked!!

Author's Response: I didn't think I could be happier than after your last review. This has wonderfully proven me wrong. Thank you so much!!! >dancing<

Oh God. Please stop making me cry. The way he takes care of her is just...So very. I don't think I can find words. And i want tree chapters of her "father" suffering. Pwetty-pwetty- please. You know the law.

Author's Response: Uh-uh. Can't do it. The more you cry, the prouder I feel. But I'll see what I can do about the father. ;~) Thank you! You're so awesome!

So today was the most boringest, awfulest poppiest day at work/school & I decided to re-read Heal Over & this. And I realized that for what it's worth, in my book this stuff is in like Terri, & jjblazer territory - the O.G.s.

That's right I said it, there are Original Gangsters in W&R fanfic (gangsters with a hard 'r', mind you). And I'm keeping your stories in that general frame of mind.

I should stop bothering before you consider pressing charges for harassment or worse, not update...

Author's Response: My eyes popped and, because there are sleeping people in my house right now, I bit my fist to keep from screaming crazily at my computer--in a good way. Do know how hard it is to do a silent happy dance? Its like trying to tiptoe past Wolverine when the whole floor is carpeted with bubble wrap. Anyway--thank you. That's one of my most self-indulgent of daydreams, having someone say that to me. Im beyond ecstatic. ...And it's strange-I got my alert just as I fineshed picking out pictures for you.

So here I am again, gushing over your amazing writing, wanting to sob because this chapter was so heartfelt. But I refuse to cry because, well, that would be ridiculous, right? Because they’re not even real people and I’m not still stood in the corner of Logan’s apartment watching that scene play out. Right?

“He picked the quilt off the floor, tucked her back in and listened to her beg him to stop something he hadn't begun.” – okay, I’m definitely going to cry. And my hubby is going to think I’ve lost my mind when I try to explain why...

Author's Response: You're saying this to the girl who gets teary eyed over road kill and Allstate commercials? Lol. >hugs< Thank you very much, and don't take this the wrong way but I hope you keep crying.

“The Girl by RoseSumner, one of your favorite stories at The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive has been updated.” Oh how I love e-mails that begin with these simple words! Usually received around 5am once a week (if a certain person keeps to schedule!!) and I just have to dive right in – it’s a great wake up call, bleary eyes are suddenly clear as a bell and trying to read at lightning speed before reality sets in and I have to go to work for some of that ‘Stupid necessary income’.

Don’t know why you're disappointed with it, I wasn’t, and I’m the reader so what I say goes! Your description is wonderful especially in this chapter of Marie, so little is said yet we can see/feel every emotion she’s experiencing through action and reaction. Your Logan – well I’ve said it every week but hell once more wont kill anyone...Loving him.

I’m a pretty tough reader, can read the darkest / evil / saddest / cruel / bloodthirsty / all of the above, fics without blinking an eye. Your end line however “tucked her back in and listened to her beg him to stop something he hadn't begun.” There was the sound of my heart breaking but I’m going to deny it if anyone asks so keep it under your hat.

Love your A/N anything that makes me smile that early in the morning deserves a mention! I think your ‘rambling skills’ are contagious though so I better either go and lie down or get to work hmmmmmm choices, choices.
Thank you for the update look forward to the next one x

Author's Response: I sat here for about ten minutes--once this morning (because checking reviews is *my* great wake up call) and this afternoon, trying to put together an appropriate thank you for this piece of awesomeness. This is the only thing that comes semi-close..... >SCREAMING JUMPING LAUGHING FIST-PUMPING GOING WEEEEEEEE ALL THE WAY HOME< Oh--and thanks.

Only one complaint...as with all your chapters they are always too short!

Once again wonderfully written (and I have to thank you for actually taking the time to punctuate and check grammar. You are so gifted with expressing emotion and you literally create images in my mind with your writing.

Cannot wait for the next installment, I'm excited to see how the relationship grows between them.

Author's Response: My favorite complaint in the whole world. Thank you. >hugs< I wish I could buy you coffee...with too much cream and a scoop of icecream.

This story makes me wanna cry, but somehow I have this feeling that everything is going to be okay. :D

Author's Response: Oh, yeah. Im a sucker for happy endings. Thank you!!