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Date: 01/04/2011 1:08:21 AM Title: Chapter 12
This just broke my heart:
"You want to shower first, Kid?" A little boy eager to show off his card collection.
The girl looked at him, and Logan guessed she heard his words differently.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it.
Date: 12/23/2010 6:44:36 AM Title: Chapter 12
I'm about to have an aneurysm of my own since the link to the Hugh pic didn't work.
I must see it...
I am so in love with this chapter because I have spent my own fair share of time in Motel 6's. I wanna stay at the one you described. Mine never had a fridge and you had to pay for snacks.
Very well done.
Linda.
Author's Response: If you email me, I'll send it to you. Thank you!!!
Date: 10/24/2010 6:53:00 PM Title: Chapter 12
That was amazing. So intense and realistic. Wow.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'll begin typing up the next chapter tomorrow, but it might not be posted until Tuesday. :~)
Date: 10/13/2010 9:31:36 AM Title: Chapter 12
Um... the link doesn't work for me. Any ideas?
Ok, FB. "He didn't want the schools resident to think he couldn't take care of his own." Whoa! There's a sudden sense of pride in an unexpected place! And a timid shoot of belonging to someone, the germination of a pack.And so much amazing consideration.
I love your careful restraint in shining some low-watt light on the workings of the girl's mind.
Author's Response: It doesn't work for anyone. I screwed up the link. :~( Thank you so much. You're fantastic.
Date: 10/13/2010 8:57:08 AM Title: Chapter 12
I seen a tiny, microscopic light at the end of the tunnel.
I think things can only get better, or at least I hope so.
more please
Author's Response: <3 Thanks!!!!!
Date: 10/12/2010 11:36:58 PM Title: Chapter 12
Awww! Loved this one! Keep 'em coming please!
Author's Response: I will, thank you!
[Report This]Date: 10/12/2010 10:35:12 PM Title: Chapter 12
Your writing has such detail and specificness that it just wraps me up in a world that I LOVE to be in! I ignore everything and everyone when I read your stories. And I am happy to do so. Keep up the great work :D
Author's Response: Thats the greatest thing to hear.Thank you so much.
Date: 10/12/2010 6:26:06 PM Title: Chapter 12
How in the world is this girl going to handle the mansion!? I can't wait to see her come out of her shell some more...thanks!
Author's Response: Haha! Super-duper-pooper-scooper thanks+a hug+caramel apples.
Date: 10/12/2010 2:27:03 PM Title: Chapter 12
Well, what can I say? What an amazing and captivating chapter. Life is so crazy right now that I have zero time to write and little time to read and review, however this is one story I could never miss. Love it!
“Packs of nerds walking around, sweaty masks contrasting oddly with their pale necks. Should certainly grease the girl's way into the mansion.” – hahahahaha!
Author's Response: I'm so glad. Thank you+hug+big bowl of chocolate cake batter that you can cook or eat raw-I won't judge.
Date: 10/12/2010 8:43:30 AM Title: Chapter 12
That clerk-lady description is wonderful!!!! How many times do we think "there is something VERY wrong with this, but I'm not goin' to to anything, because it's not my place"? Bravo...Again.
Author's Response: So true. Thank you+a hug+s'mores.
[Report This]Date: 10/12/2010 5:17:12 AM Title: Chapter 12
When the notification of your story came in I was busy reorganising my Farmville farm! But dropped everything in order to read the latest chapter!!
And what a chapter!! In reality, a transition of sorts, between leaving and arriving, but so full of the incredible eye for detail I have come to know you possess. Once again, I am almost moved to tears with your words.
Incidentally, it's Hugh Jackman's birthday today!! Time to celebrate!!
Author's Response: I thought it was on the 17th!!!!! >stamps foot, throws tantrum< Damnitdamnitdamnit! I was going to bake creepy little cupcakes to celebrate. >sigh< Next year. :~P Im sorry to pull you away from your farm, but I swear I'm much more grateful than the virtual horses. Thank you+a hug+cookies.
[Report This]Date: 10/12/2010 1:56:53 AM Title: Chapter 12
While they haven’t got far, haven’t done much, this chapter shows why you’re so good - it contains much more than many other stories contain in their entirety. I’m so glad you’re not in a rush for everything to fall in place, grateful that you’re taking you’re time to put in chapters/sections like this one with wonderful descriptions of the smallest of things –the imagery your words produces is crystal clear - It really is like watching a film in your head while you read.
Already up to number 2 on the top ten most reviewed – can’t see you being anywhere but number 1 by the time you’ve finished – That will be 2 for you in that particular list which must tell you something!
Author's Response: Would it be cheesy to say that your one of my ten most favorite people? Yeah. Yeah, your right. Too corny. Anytime I feel my ego has started to deflate, I think about that list and it swells right back up. Im so proud. Thank you for making this Monday-on-a-Tuesday great again.
Date: 10/12/2010 1:00:56 AM Title: Chapter 12
This whole chapter is one of the best pieces of any kind of writing in any genre in any format that I have ever had the pleasure to read. To choose particular passages to quote is almost ridiculously impossible, but I must make special note of two:
"You want to shower first, Kid?" A little boy eager to show off his card collection.
The girl looked at him, and Logan guessed she heard his words differently. But she nodded, went into the bathroom quietly and shut the door behind her. The click of a lock.
How amazing is it that he understands how she heard that? And yet, he offers no explanation or clarification. What would be the point? Neither is he angry at her supposition -- after all, he's never hurt her. He's just quietly resigned to be there for every uncomfortable moment of her recovery, however long that may be.
The other one: of a breed for whom paternity would always be an accidental, unknown state and any night passed with a young female would not be spent in platonic pursuits. This is without a doubt the most beautiful way to call someone a horny bastard that I have ever read. And the best part is that this particular young female has changed all that for Logan -- forever -- whether he really knows it or not.
Can't wait for them to get to the mansion... --Wendie
Author's Response: How do you do that? Make someone feel like the proudest, greatest person that ever sat behind a computer screen? (Though I'm actually stretched out on the couch, watching Law and Order and reading these beautiful words for about the 8th time on my psp). Anywho, thank you+a tight hug+cheesecake.
[Report This]Date: 10/12/2010 12:56:16 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved this chapter, I hope Marie stops being afraid of Logan soon and start trusting him again. The final words were so so sad, poor marie! :(
Im happy to know we -the reviewers- cooperate to keep this story moving. This has became for me like a fave TV show or something, I just cant get enough of it!
BTW, the link to the picture doesnt work.
Am I forgetting something? Oh yeah, please please update soon!
Author's Response: You don't happen to know how to fix the link, do you? Im not sure what I did wrong. Thank you × a billion × a billion+a hug+ plus hot chocolate with whip cream.
Date: 10/12/2010 12:34:53 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh, oh, oh! I'm sorry to double post, but I forgot to say:
that I loved this line: "He didn't want the schools resident to think he couldn't take care of his own."
it was like kittens....okay going to sleep now
Author's Response: Dang you! You rude double posting wifflewaffle! How dare you make me so happy! Lol. I love quoters. They make me *squee* and hum Temptations songs.
Date: 10/12/2010 12:24:45 AM Title: Chapter 12
:( I just want poor Marie to catch a break. I know she's getting there - getting out of the city & having Logan are breaks for her. The simpleton in me just wants her to have a moment of peace or lightness, even briefly during her recover. However, I know that wouldn't be the case in real life, which goes to show how scarily accurate & raw (in a good way) this story (is it too premature to call it an Epic yet?) is.
I hope this review makes sense. I got the alert at around midnight & couldn't leave it for morning.
Also, very happy you've got fan art! It really is dead on. Sadly my artistic talent peaked in high school. Therefore you will continue to only receive suggestive/depraved Logan/Hugh Jackman pictures from me.
Author's Response: Depraved pictures of that flesh-colored mountain of man beast? Thats all? How ever will I manage? Imma try to squeeze in some kittens for you, but don't blame me if they're as rabid as our plot bunnies. Thank you+a hug+a whole box of cupcakes.
[Report This]Date: 10/12/2010 12:18:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
I love this story so much. Marie's reactions and Logan's desire to help her are just so real. Please continue with this wonderful story soon!
Author's Response: Thank you+a hug+chocolate strawberries.
[Report This]Date: 10/11/2010 11:49:56 PM Title: Chapter 12
Very nice transition chapter Rose.Anything I can do to encourage updates, let me know. Looking forward to seeing how the mansion residents react.
Author's Response: Thank you+a hug+vanilla ice cream with caramel syrup.
Date: 10/11/2010 11:27:05 PM Title: Chapter 12
The link didn't work. This chapter just felt like a sad little necessary sigh along the storyline. I want to slap the clerk lady though. Although, come to think of it, it's probably a good thing she doesn't have enough morals to act on her suspicions and call the cops like any other decent human being. Your story is rather shy of those, isn't it? Hell, the hero in this story, as wonderfully unlawful good as he may be, would definitely NOT describe himself in the decent human being category, would he?
~Mia
Author's Response: Well, golly gosh darnitt. >stamps foot< Don't worry, Im fairly certain if I glare hard enough the link will fix itself. Thank you+a hug+tiramisu.
Date: 10/11/2010 9:54:37 PM Title: Chapter 12
Well don't have a freaking aneurysm, then I'd never get my fill of this story. I love the detail you use, its just amazing and my heart is so wound up between the two of them, I just know somehow someway they will make it to a happy ending. And dammit, even if it take another 50 chapters to get that happy ending, I wanna get there on your journey.
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you+a hug+a funnel cake=you're amazing.