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Date: 01/04/2011 1:13:32 AM Title: Chapter 14
This one is hard too, but I'm determined to narrow it down to one, so I think this wins:
She seemed to be waiting for him to thank her for something, but with each glance at his face that expectation faded away, and a thousand books worth of questions took it's place.
Author's Response: I love you in an entirely non-creepy way.
Date: 12/23/2010 8:19:35 AM Title: Chapter 14
Mrs. Grey? When did she get married? Shouldn't it be Ms. Grey, or even Mrs. Summers?
Could be excuse... excused.
Wondering it? Maybe wondering if...
Didn't w agree? Didn't we agree.
Love the hippie asshole darlin'. Figures pansy Scooter would pick up a hippie asshole like that kid.
And still no Hugh link!
Linda and a smug Wolvie Muse.
Author's Response: Hope you don't mind me answering these as a whole? Thank you so much, I owe you. As soon as I hit submit for this I'll be coming through the chapters, trying to find those lines. Drives me crazy that they've been there that long. I hope you have a wonderful day(or night, as you seem to have the sleep cycle of a bat). Thank you again for taking the time to read, review, and help me correct those typos.
[Report This]Date: 11/19/2010 12:04:05 AM Title: Chapter 14
Thanks for another great chapter. I can't wait to see more interaction between Jean, Logan, and Rogue once Jean realizes how important Rogue is to Logan. It's been so long! Please update soon!
Author's Response: The next chappie will be up Sunday or Monday. Its a long one! Thank you for your patience.
Date: 11/09/2010 5:02:38 PM Title: Chapter 14
Okay so I was thinking about this on the drive home & I can't believe I forgot to mention it in my previous review. I'm an ass.
"He judged the texture of her silence, the shifting emotions in her blood" I love how you just snuck this in there you trixy author, you. "Texture" is such an appropriate word. I feel like while authors throw around Logan's senses, no one's really been able to grasp what the process is like for him. It really feels like you did that here.
P. to the S. You're one review away from having the #1 Most Reviewed Story! I'm pre-gaming your accomplishment & having a beer on your behalf.
Author's Response: The "oh, and-" kinds of reviews are my favorites. Yeah, yeah. I call everything that-but thats only cuz I *always mean it*. (Know you understand). Thank you soooooinsertbillionOsooo much!!! >hugs< Feel like such a cowgirl--you made me say, "yahoo!". Dang you. Way to cram me into *that* stereotype....
Date: 11/09/2010 12:48:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
Well I kinda don't like Jean here... don't really know why maybe because she is so indifferent towards Marie... hmmm Jubes can be a good therapist but I
don't know if Marie is ready for that kind of treatment.
can't wait for more
Author's Response: Oh, honey, we ALL hate Jean. It's just so fun! :~D Thank you!!!
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2010 9:19:21 PM Title: Chapter 14
Thank you. Despite the vanilla, the lack of bleeding and screaming fits, this had me on edge the whole time. Thank you.
~Mia
Author's Response: Aaaaw!! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2010 2:17:32 AM Title: Chapter 14
Is it bad that I wanna hit Logan with a big lump of 4x2 ? – thought it might help him clear his head a little, understand what his instincts are screaming at him.
Just for fun can I hit Jean too? (Repeatedly and with an evil grin on my face)
Like everyone else I loved the “I'm not staying with you?" Line, 5 words and you have hearts breaking everywhere. I also have to mention this one… "I know, honey. They've got blackboards and everything." Brilliantly placed in the middle of so much tension, made me smile.
Again at the risk of saying what everyone else has/will - such wonderful, descriptive writing, never over the top, always just dragging the reader further in. You write the subtitles to pictures that are as clear as day running in readers minds. We see how she looks/how he stands/ their body language/ their facial expressions etc. It’s so easy to see/feel everything.
‘I hope you are all pleased with this chapter.’ – daft question that could only ever have one possible answer.......YES!! now stop reading and get to it ;)
Author's Response: Only if you put a nail-preferably rusty-in the plank when you go for Jean. This review gave me the WarmNFuzzies...not in a kinky way, but in a glowing thank you way. Muchas gracias.
[Report This]Date: 11/07/2010 11:32:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
What is it about Jean that, even when she isn't doing it on purpose, she's still a skeezy bitch? Might have something to do with that stick up her ass...Case in point: "You'll call me Mrs. Grey," the auburn woman corrected, a firm edge to a voice that rehearsal had made kind, maternal. Nothing naturally kind or nurturing about this chick. Gives a whole new meaning to 'practicing' medicine, especially the bedside manner part.
But enough about 'Mrs. Grey'...
As usual, what makes this story worth waiting for are the changes, some more subtle than others, that the girl is inspiring in Logan. No 'stop, drop and run' delivery for her, like some mutant mercenary FedEx driver. Oh, hell, no. For her, he even puts up with Jean for the whole deluxe tour. And he's definitely planning to stick around a while, another about-face for him, I'm sure.
While I would have no objection to you giving us day-by-day, blow-by-blow descriptions of her every move at the mansion, because your descriptive writing is just that good, I do have to confess that I am looking forward to reading how he copes with the biggest change of all -- when she needs (wants) him less as a protector and more as a lover. --Wendie
Author's Response: I'd wanted to write a GoodJean in this so badly....>sigh< But its just too hard. It goes against my nature--and *hers*. Ah, well. BitchJean is fun. :~D Thank you, my superconfabulososmamboawesomepossum friend. In the next two chapters, the time frame will be trotting along much faster. I hope you enjoy it.
[Report This]Date: 11/07/2010 9:52:59 PM Title: Chapter 14
It just makes my day when I see there is an update to one of my favorites. Poor Rogue though. And damn that mean Jean.
Author's Response: Aaaaawwww! *squee* Im touched. Thank you. >hugs very tightly<
Date: 11/07/2010 9:13:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
Yay! Your back! I can't wait to read more...I hope jubilee is nice to rogue though
Author's Response: Hey! Long time no see!...lol. Thank you. And Jubilee is going to be...interesting....in this.
[Report This]Date: 11/07/2010 8:06:41 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow what a chapter! Finally we're seeing some hints of trust and affection from the girl towards Logan, can't wait for more! The "im not staying with you?" part killed me, it was so vivid and Jean; why doesnt she mind her own business? Im with Logan, I think Marie should totally stay with him.
The link doesnt work, try writting the url separately, like www google (.com) or something like that (some sites automatically block extrernal urls). Good luck and please please try to update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!!! This time those trust-hints just might stick. ;~) I always look forward to your reviews--how do you make me bounce so much?
Date: 11/07/2010 6:47:45 PM Title: Chapter 14
I. Hate. Jean. Grey. Poor Marie. You would think, with all this mind reading people, they would be smarter, but nooooo....
Author's Response: Funny. I'd been planning to show that I was capable of writing GoodJean, but...yeah, that failed epically... :~D Thank you!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 11/07/2010 6:15:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh mess, the link for the fanart did not appear :( Those gremlins or the ghost of Jean fucking with us Rogan shippers again?
"You'll call me Mrs. Grey," - Oh that presumptuous bitch. Gotta hate her!
I heart the idea of Logan locking his "charge" in a shed with the PlayBoys - surely not from his own stash?! - these little hints into your characters' lives before the story are delightful and always dead on.
"I'm not staying with you?" - Oh man, I can *see* her expression and it's heartbreaking. Is there anything left of poor little Marie to put back together again?
Author's Response: Dangit, dangit, dangit, DANGITTT!!!! >stamps foot, continues tantrum for several awkward minutes< I don't know what to do with that link. >sigh< Its too bad. That picture is really great; people should see it....Anyway, thank you Sahara! I wish I could give you mozzerella sticks and candy corn. (The usual symbols of gratitude.)