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Date: 01/04/2011 1:15:41 AM Title: Chapter 15
This one:
"You're going to eat." His voice was inflexible, but not harsh. A kind stone.
Date: 12/23/2010 8:37:11 AM Title: Chapter 15
I want a cake on a naked Hugh, so I can have my cake and eat him up too. I promise to blow out the candle after I lick off the icing.
Hehe!
Can I drown Jean for being so cruel to my girl and not letting her stay with me?
Naughty Linda and frustrated Wolvie Muse.
Date: 11/22/2010 9:13:23 PM Title: Chapter 15
Geez, I'm sorry Jubes is so unfriendly toward Marie, but I totally get how Marie, through no fault of her own, really can't give someone like Jubes much to work with. Here's hoping they work it out.
I love your description of how Marie deals with the ever-present Logan -- how she 'relied on (his assistance) as unthinkingly as oxygen.' I wonder if it's dawned on him yet that the connection runs both ways -- and on many levels.
On to Ch. 16. Love the double shot of deliciousness! --Wendie
Author's Response: Thats very insightful, and grin-inducing at the same time. Thank you. Question...How do you feel about the POV shift to Marie? Do you think it will harm the story if the rest is only through her eyes?
Date: 11/22/2010 8:48:55 PM Title: Chapter 15
"You're going to eat." I love that there's still this food-bond between them. I appreciate you keeping this. I think I said it in an earlier review (and probably better), but given that Logan isn't Mr. Talkative I really dig that he's still pushing food on her. It's very feral. And I heart that.
"She didn't understand why the better of these two filled her with more fear than the first ever had" Like everyone else I loved this line too. Do you realize your own amazingness when so many different people from all over & all different ages connect with just one sentence you wrote? You should. Just....just do it all right? Take a hot second & think about your amazingness - we'll wait...
Author's Response: Do you have any idea how much you've made my head grow with this review? Do you? And I'm begging you, please don't stop. I'll be bouncing all day long because of this. Thank you.
Date: 11/22/2010 6:10:14 PM Title: Chapter 15
....She didn't understand why the better of these two filled her with more fear than the first ever had.
I understand because she's afraid that something bad is gonna happen - thank gawd Logan is there.
Author's Response: >big smile< Thank you!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 11/22/2010 5:25:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
First off “I TOLD YOU SO”.....I told you this one would end up as number one and it’s not finished yet!!
Anyway on to the review which is entitled ‘Things I Loved’
Loved the comparisons “She didn't understand why the better of these two filled her with more fear than the first ever had”
Loved the sadness - the feeling of isolation and loneliness throughout the chapter.
Loved Logan’s lurking!
The end (or not as i see you've posted 2 chapters so I may be back in a min...)
Author's Response: Love that you loved it. Thanks for leaving another bounce-inducing review. >hugs<
[Report This]Date: 11/22/2010 4:15:59 PM Title: Chapter 15
Really liked this chapter, helping me see them together in the mansion.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad.