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Date: 04/24/2013 4:57:38 AM Title: Chapter 10
This was good and I'm sorry you didn't have time to really flesh it out. But someday when you're not busy w/ work perhaps you can continue the series? Pretty please? :-)
Date: 01/02/2011 12:29:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
B*tch. I hate her. And I have mixed feelings about Logan now
Date: 01/02/2011 12:19:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love me some Jean bashing
Date: 01/02/2011 12:14:23 PM Title: Chapter 3
Is she leaving??
Date: 01/02/2011 12:11:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love the professor...
Date: 01/02/2011 12:08:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my gosh, how sad! Poor Logie! Poorer Rogue!!!
Date: 09/23/2010 11:24:57 AM Title: Chapter 7
Storm is too kind.
Date: 09/23/2010 10:52:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
I LIKE the new 'tude!!!
Date: 09/23/2010 10:45:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
I think you're diving right in, without looking at how deep the water is and I LOVE IT!!
[Report This]Date: 09/06/2010 9:02:42 PM Title: Chapter 10
Baww. SO CUTE!
[Report This]Date: 09/02/2010 2:58:54 PM Title: Chapter 10
Awww, such a lovely story :-D xXx
[Report This]Date: 08/25/2010 10:46:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
You're not a native speaker of English, are you? You must not be, because there were so many jumbled sentences where I did not understand what you meant to say. Half the time, I didn't know who was doing what ... pronouns and objects and such are frequently vague or even contradictory in your writing. So, I'll have to give this a low rating until you get a better beta!
[Report This]Date: 08/24/2010 10:54:40 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow. This is brilliant. I totally was not expecting it to end up on that path. Brutal. I love it!
Date: 08/24/2010 7:54:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hello,
I have to repeat what another reviewer has said. Interesting concepts but you really do need to re-read or beta read your work. There are some obvious mistakes that sometimes makes your writing hard to follow.
Please keep on going though because the story is interesting, it just needs a little tweaking.
Date: 08/24/2010 6:56:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really like the storyline here! You may want to be less formal in your speech..just makes it flow better in my opinion...but great story...can't wait to see where it goes from here!
[Report This]Date: 08/24/2010 12:15:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow. He's a dick.
Date: 08/22/2010 7:02:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good start! Updated soon:)
Date: 08/21/2010 10:52:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like your plot, and you introduced a couple of interesting story lines to follow in your first chapter, so that's good (ie R might get kidnapped, Jean's a tramp, Jubes failing class). I do suggest that you start spell checking your work. There were quite a few incorrect words, and always try to have someone else read it. Good luck, hope to see more soon.
Date: 08/21/2010 2:01:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awww poor rogue. Logan is an ass! Update soon!