Reviews For Lust = Betrayal x2
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Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 12:08:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh my gosh, how sad! Poor Logie! Poorer Rogue!!!

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2010 10:45:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

I think you're diving right in, without looking at how deep the water is and I LOVE IT!!

Reviewer: Shuttlelauncher Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2010 6:56:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really like the storyline here! You may want to be less formal in your speech..just makes it flow better in my opinion...but great story...can't wait to see where it goes from here!

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2010 12:15:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow. He's a dick.

Reviewer: nicca Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2010 7:02:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good start! Updated soon:)

Reviewer: Dita Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2010 10:52:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like your plot, and you introduced a couple of interesting story lines to follow in your first chapter, so that's good (ie R might get kidnapped, Jean's a tramp, Jubes failing class). I do suggest that you start spell checking your work. There were quite a few incorrect words, and always try to have someone else read it. Good luck, hope to see more soon.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2010 2:01:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awww poor rogue. Logan is an ass! Update soon!

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