Reviews For Lust = Betrayal x2
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Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 12:11:34 PM Title: Chapter 2

I love the professor...

Reviewer: kushti Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2010 7:54:04 PM Title: Chapter 2


I have to repeat what another reviewer has said. Interesting concepts but you really do need to re-read or beta read your work. There are some obvious mistakes that sometimes makes your writing hard to follow.

Please keep on going though because the story is interesting, it just needs a little tweaking.

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