Reviews For Lust = Betrayal x2
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Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2010 11:24:57 AM Title: Chapter 7

Storm is too kind.

Reviewer: Capt_Mackenzie Signed star star [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2010 10:46:50 PM Title: Chapter 7

You're not a native speaker of English, are you? You must not be, because there were so many jumbled sentences where I did not understand what you meant to say. Half the time, I didn't know who was doing what ... pronouns and objects and such are frequently vague or even contradictory in your writing. So, I'll have to give this a low rating until you get a better beta!

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2010 10:54:40 PM Title: Chapter 7

Wow. This is brilliant. I totally was not expecting it to end up on that path. Brutal. I love it!

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