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She's evil, teasing, and twisted.... EXACTLY what I'd do to my lover in the same circumstance!!! *ct scurries off to read the next chapter and make notes of Marie's trickiness*
It's a great start for the story and I totally love the fact that you're writing multiple chapters!
Keep up the great job!
Yes, the second chapter worked exceptionally well. I really like it. Your tone is especially wonderful.
First fic ever? Could have fooled me! 'Outstanding' is a bit overused, but right now I'm a little too blown away to come up with anything fancier. You nailed everything from the characterization to the emotion to the 'near-smut' of the fantasy.
I can just hear Scott whining. Tee-hee. And then there's the mental picture of Jean as a gaping statue and Logan tossing paper clips (or whatever) into her mouth. Priceless!
This is a truly delightful addition to the lore of the Chair and, just like Logan, I cannot wait for that next email! --Wendie
Author's Response: I almost squealed when I read this review. I am so glad you approve because I wanted to do justice to your epic creation of the chair. Also, I've read so many bad Xavier fics lately that I kind of felt it necessary to cut the poor man some slack. Not Jean though, still can't stand her...