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Reviewer: DarkDragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2012 11:37:13 AM Title: A little more than kin, and less than kind

*Clears throat*

Update? Pretty please?

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2011 8:42:45 PM Title: I like this place and willingly could waste my time in it

Another awesome chapter! I can't wait for more. Keep up the great work!!

Reviewer: atmd Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2011 6:58:35 PM Title: I like this place and willingly could waste my time in it

Ah, naked Logan. Perfect way to end any chapter, really ;). I'm curious to see how things will develop now that everyone's all . . . neighborly. Feels like things are starting to come together for Rogue--she didn't even have to speak through The Bard this chapter *gasp*. And, this really goes without saying, but Logan carrying her? Awwwwww. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2011 7:57:13 PM Title: I like this place and willingly could waste my time in it

awww i like this story. :) it makes me happy.

Author's Response: I'm glad! That's my goal in life.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2011 3:13:49 AM Title: I like this place and willingly could waste my time in it

so happy to see an update. I love how you are developing everything. I also love how you are writing Logan. He is so protective of Marie already. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Happy dance!

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2011 1:25:59 AM Title: I like this place and willingly could waste my time in it

Again, lovely chapter. I'm assuming Logan and Rogue's relationship will develop to become somewhat different than the relationships he has with Jubes and Kitty (at least I hope so...I love me some Rogan). :D Thanks for the new chapter- can't wait to read the next one!!!

Author's Response: No worries on that count. I love me some Rogan too but I always feel better about stories when they don't just fall into a romantic relationship. Especially with Marie being the way she is right now, there's no way she's ok enough to be anyone's girlfriend.

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2011 12:29:40 AM Title: Though this be madness, yet there is method in 't

Wow, how'd I miss this new chapter???

Awwww, Wolverine in Rogue's head is so protective. Adorably protective, actually...*melts* I really like the dynamics between Logan, Kitty, Jubilee, and Rogue.

Not quite sure how I feel about Norbert yet...lol. I think I'm probably warped because I always have this fear of dolls being 'alive' or having a personality. Creepy! So in my mind, this Norbert personality is kind of a nightmare come true...I'm sure I'll get over it.

Anyway, love the story. Off to read the next chapter!!

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2011 11:08:38 PM Title: I like this place and willingly could waste my time in it

This chapter as really cute. I really enjoyed it. I adore the relationship you have created with Logan and 'his' girls.

Author's Response: Thanks! I love what it's becoming as well!

Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2011 10:21:25 PM Title: Though this be madness, yet there is method in 't

Great work here, interesting how Norbert had taken on its own persona in Rogue's mind as a companion to her imposed captivity. Using Shakespeare to give Norbert a distinctive voice is quite frankly, wanderbar!

Love the interaction with Jubilee, Kitty and Logan. Fantastic story, I really love it! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I love Kitty, Jubes and Logan together, too. They make me smile.

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2011 11:14:37 AM Title: Though this be madness, yet there is method in 't

A very compelling story. I hope to read more soon.

Author's Response: There's more coming hopefully over the weekend. Glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: lily5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2011 9:49:28 AM Title: Though this be madness, yet there is method in 't

Really interesting take.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you think so!

Reviewer: atmd Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2011 8:38:32 AM Title: Though this be madness, yet there is method in 't

Awww Wolverine & Logan in her head are cute. I like Norbert, but it's good to see Rogue back in control of herself. Didn't seem convoluted or difficult to follow to me. Xavier's insights about blue fuzzy's origins were interesting . . . And kinda heartbreaking. Poor girl. I bet she's gonna take a liking to Beast. Would be a dream come true to find a big real life version of your imaginary friend who also has a tendency to quote the Bard :P

Author's Response: You want to know what's funny? I honestly didn't think about that until you just pointed it out... hmmm. Something to think about. I'm feeling better with Rogue back in control too. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2011 12:28:59 AM Title: Hell is empty and all the devils are here

Norbert's real! EEK!

More, please. :)

Author's Response: But he's not evi so it's ok, right?

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2011 2:12:18 PM Title: Hell is empty and all the devils are here

I love this more with each chapter. Thank you.

~Mia

Author's Response: WRFA gremlins again?

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2011 2:11:56 PM Title: Hell is empty and all the devils are here

I love this more with each chapter. Thank you.

~Mia

Author's Response: I love the you're loving it.

Reviewer: atmd Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2011 10:53:47 PM Title: Hell is empty and all the devils are here

This story is so good. I sat down to start the first chapter, and ended up going straight through to the end of chapter 9, heh. I'm loving this slightly crazy Rogue, the wonder twins, Wolverine, Norbert. Really great character dynamics all around.

Jubilee's "Can we keep her?" Priceless. So many laugh-out-loud lines from her and Kitty.

Looking forward to the next chapter, for sure. I'm excited to see how Rogue's character develops, and I don't know if I'm reading too much into this, but Xavier turning to Logan for the decision about Rogue intrigued me. Does Xavier know something Logan doesn't know???

Reviewer: DarkDragonfly Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2011 3:27:06 PM Title: A little more than kin, and less than kind

Everytime I see that you have updated this story its dance part time over here!!

Like Serafirm stated, you had me thinking with this chapter, and its so nice to put a personality to Norbit and of course, Im too am in love with crazy Marie and the ever more protective Logan....Please dont keep us waiting too long for another :)

Author's Response: I'll try not to! You might have a dance party when you see an update. I have one when I see a review. I sometimes feel a little bad because Marie is just so messed up in this, I feel like I'm tormenting her. But, I mist write what the muses dictate.

Reviewer: serafim Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2011 10:31:56 AM Title: Hell is empty and all the devils are here

You had my brain working on this, LOL!

Your crazy Rogue is great - I love how thrown Logan is by her and his growing sense of protection. Xavier is going to have his work cut out for him for sure.

Author's Response: Working in a good way or in a bad one? I'm hoping the former. Glad you're liking her. I think she's pretty great too.

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2011 2:57:20 AM Title: Hell is empty and all the devils are here

!!!

Awesome.

Seriously, now I'm really fascinated to read the next chapter! My one piece of feedback would be a suggestion that you consider working on your "show, don't tell" techniques. But your ideas are very original and you do a pretty solid job with the characterizations. :)

Author's Response: Glad you're liking this. And thanks for your thoughts on my writing style. Could you explain the "show, don't tell" thing a little bit more for me than that? Maybe an example? I'm having issues trying to figure it out on my own but that might be because I know exactly what is going with every person at every moment in the story so things may seem clear to me when they aren't to everyone else. Help please! I am always striving to be a better writer. Maybe email me? haniccol@gmail.com Thank you so much!

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2011 5:36:30 PM Title: My salad days, when I was green in judgment

Oh that can't be followed by anything good. They're really not thinking yet are they?

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2011 12:33:45 AM Title: My salad days, when I was green in judgment

You're back! Yays! :D

Ooh, so I'm guessing Kurt, the fuzzy elf himself, has a space in her head, though I suppose it could also be Hank. Either way, good plot development in this chapter. Hope things go smoother for you from here on out.

Author's Response: Mmmmaaayyybbbeeeee. Or maybe not. Guess we'll have to wait and see. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Melancholy Rogue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2011 4:08:55 AM Title: A little more than kin, and less than kind

Another great chapter. I have missed this fic! II could so see Jubes in that back seat! Hilarious! I can't wait to see what happens now that they are at Westchester.

Reviewer: serafim Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2011 7:44:50 PM Title: My salad days, when I was green in judgment

Oh wow. Poor Marie. Great update, I look forward to how she fits in (or not) with the rest of the X-Mansion inhabitants! :)

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2011 12:16:24 AM Title: In my mind's eye

I really am still loving this. I reread it tonight. I would love to see an update. (hint hint)

Author's Response: One is coming! Thank you for sticking by me. So much love to you!

Reviewer: DarkDragonfly Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2011 4:45:37 PM Title: A little more than kin, and less than kind

Just letting you know that you still have people waiting on this story *bats eyelashes*

Hint hint :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know you were still waiting. I am doing everything I can to wrestle another chapter out of my brain again. Thanks for not giving up on me.

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