these characters don't seem to be acting like themselves ... in any of the chapters except the 1st one. I think you went off the rails the minute you decided to make Logan a total pig. His nose would NEVER be able to stand living in a dump so bad even an ordinary human would choke on the fumes, y'know?

She´s really more reserved than in the movies. :3 But you wrote them in a different world so I guess it´s alright with me if they´re different, too. But Logan was really rude to her though. xD Maybe he just sometimes doesn´t know how to talk with her or he´s still angry because of the car..? (I believe he was friendlier in the last chapters so maybe that´s the reason.) Hmn, but if I were Rogue I wouldn´t dare to say anything to him, too...I mean he saved her and helps her now. ^^
I´m curious what´s going to happen next and if she´s going to tell him about her mutation. She kinda mentioned her skin but it seems that he doesn´t think she´s a mutant, too..?