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Date: 12/11/2011 11:51:38 PM Title: Hearing
"Tell me how"....indeed.
I do see the potential squick...but come on...Marie and Logan...in a sense they are fucked up so that they follow a code unto themselves.
The tension...the emotion...it packs a sensually hot punch!
Clicking that next button NOW!
Date: 01/26/2011 12:15:08 AM Title: Hearing
underage smunderage who cares
lol
Author's Response: Apparently not many at WRFA! Glad you are enjoying :D
Date: 01/25/2011 4:58:12 AM Title: Hearing
The alternation with their alter-ego's is very interesting! Also love the depth you give to the situation also making Marie a slave to her desire.
You seem to have all the ingredients for some great angst-filled, panties-wetting let-go therapy here darlin'... But something's telling me that there's more to it than just release and fluffy declarations of love, am I right?
Author's Response: To be honest, I'm not sure how this will end yet. Release, hell yeah. Lots of that. I can't see Logan DOING fluffy declarations, but I wanted this fic to be about them breaking out of the boxes they (and others) have created for them. That IS their happy ending; what they do with it I'm not sure yet. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 01/25/2011 2:31:05 AM Title: Hearing
There are nerve endings in my body that have no business being this excited by something I just read on a computer screen. Sweet mercy, Jaq, you do have a gift.
'Exultant'. Great word. Perfectly captures the exact tone I heard in my head as I read it.
Besides the last line -- one of the greatest chapter-closers of all fucking time, if you ask me. >GAH!< -- my favorite was the following: "But just like the Rogue, (the Wolverine) was a chimera built by a million false assumptions and ill-considered expectations. Tonight, she was with Logan." Amazing description of the difference between them and their alter-egos, between the lie and the truth. And, oh, the truths he tells her...
Sorry if this review is sort of rambling, but those nerve endings are still buzzing and it makes it hard to think... --Wendie
Author's Response: Thank you, Wendie. My gift, I've been told, is for porn! I'm a writer and editor by trade, so yes, I'm very comfortable with the written word, but I'm happy to claim a very creative muse, who likes things (read: sex) to be confronting and sweaty and real and fun and revealing ... hence, I love writing Logan, in particular, because ... well, the feral is just the personification of sex, isn't he? Re exultant. Like you, I'm a word fan, and I like to use the right word, especially to sketch in the changing emotions etc. Exultant shows him moving from regretful to throwing himself into the experience. For which we are truly grateful. I'm glad you liked my chimera sentence ... I wondered if it was too pretentious, but then went ... naaah. So glad you enjoyed it all - and thanks for the wonderful, detailed reviews. They are gold.
[Report This]Date: 01/25/2011 12:46:57 AM Title: Hearing
A relationship between older Logan and younger Marie just doesn't squick me out. It should I guess, but it doesn't. I dunno how sick that makes me but I find it hawt as all get out. And this story has got me fanning myself already just wondering what's going to happen next.
Author's Response: I don't think it squicks out very many Rogan readers - but I feel a warning is necessary, just in case. My own feelings are a bit mixed; I don't believe a big age gap is necessarily an issue, but I think a gap in maturity, or simply being at different stages in one's life, can be. I think 17 can be quite vexed because most teenagers have been quite sheltered to that point, and they haven't yet gone through that glorious liberation of leaving home, being independent, and frankly, sleeping with lots of completely unsuitable men! And it disturbs me if that particular quality - being half formed - is attractive to an older man. But if its OTHER things that are attractive, well, I can work with that. Because, yes, it's hawt, hawt, hawt. Enjoy!
Date: 01/24/2011 9:42:30 PM Title: Hearing
Guh...whimper. Squeek? Th th thank you.
~Mia
Author's Response: No problem. I enjoy leaving people speechless. Thanks for reading!
Date: 01/24/2011 8:44:55 PM Title: Hearing
Gahhhh... HOT!
Author's Response: Very warm here too. Must be global warming :P
Date: 01/24/2011 7:53:00 PM Title: Hearing
Holy shit what a great chapter. Logan's words just drip sex and hotness. The paragraph whne he describes her nipples needs it's own fire department! hot hot hot.
Author's Response: Own fire department - love it!!! I'm glad you enjoyed it and am pretty sure you'll like the next chapter too ;)
Date: 01/24/2011 6:39:19 PM Title: Hearing
wow, this is so freaking hot! You certainly have a way with words! Awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you - I'm glad you are enjoying it :D
[Report This]Date: 01/24/2011 6:07:20 PM Title: Hearing
*fans self*
Hot sooo HOT!
Author's Response: Well, I'm blushing. But I think it's the fault of the next chapter, not this one ;)
[Report This]Date: 01/24/2011 5:28:15 PM Title: Hearing
OMG is it hot in here or what? More Please!
Author's Response: I've just sent the next chapter to my beta moments ago, but can reliably inform you ... it's worth the wait. Really. ;)