Reviews For To Touch the Moon
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Reviewer: jnet Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2011 10:37:24 PM Title: Chapter 17: Da Mojo

Phew. The mojo of the room. (fans self) Excellently written. I like the plot and the dialogue. The story is great. Its flow-y and not choppy at all. Its easy to read and you are doing a great job with the Remy accent. (not an easy feat) Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I am so glad that the story is working and that the Remy voice is okay. I locked my Remy!Muse in the room with me and we had a talk...He seemed to think that I didn't have his voice down because I hadn't gotten in touch with his inner-Remy (Super Heros-Geez!) and I was just tossing up a one demensional charachter...So, that led to the next chapter which is a little Remy POV to establish him as a character.rnrnThank you so much for the review! 8o)

Reviewer: Shuttlelauncher Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2011 9:36:10 PM Title: Chapter 17: Da Mojo

Oh my! ; )

Author's Response: Yeah, Logan's a master!

Reviewer: Melancholy Rogue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2011 9:30:17 PM Title: Chapter 17: Da Mojo

Well, wasn't that just 2,191 words of deliciousness! ;)

Author's Response: Thanks, I was like when is this damned chapter gonna end and my Wolvie!Muse just growled and kept on typing. Thank god I got it finished before work tomorrow or my day would have been hell. Again, thank you so much for reviewing!

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