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Date: 05/28/2011 12:41:42 PM Title: Morning glories
It was a long wait.
I'm sure ;)
[Report This]Date: 05/16/2011 2:22:56 PM Title: Morning glories
Absolutely loved Logan in this chapter, you made me smile - complete with eye wrinkles that only appear with a big stupid grin (or age, I’m going with the big stupid grin!) his frustration, impatience and thoughts ………brilliantly written, loved how it was mixed with the seriousness of their predicament, even if the smiling may have made me look like I didn’t care!
‘He didn’t say “again”, or “like before”. ‘ She liked to pretend that Rogue had dealt with this. And maybe she had. But Marie – Marie was still huddled in that corner, shaking, tormented by her memories.’ -love hard hitting lines that keep you on your toes when reading and slam you right back into the heart of the story taking away the false sense of security that appeared in the words and paras around them!
Loving jubes too – ‘But she’d never asked, because Rogue was a friend. Sort of. The sort of friend you knew nothing about, and couldn’t really trust, but liked anyway.’ In this fic, the background that you have given so far and the way you have written Rogue I think this is one of the best descriptions of how it would be/feel for Jubilee. It really fits, such a great line.
So, to sum up - great stuff, thoroughly enjoying it, bring on the next instalment x
Author's Response: Sorry I missed this last time, litlen - I do love your reviews! I'm glad you appreciated that chapter; I really like to get inside Wolverine's head, and see his impulsiveness push through all that learned control occasionally. And Jubes - she's so much fun to write. I had even more fun in the new chapter - I love her language and her skewed way of seeing things. Hope you enjoy the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2011 8:55:08 AM Title: Morning glories
Absolutely loving it. I read the chapter, then backed up to read it all in a row with the three before it again. Your creation of Wolverine and Rogue are just...mesmerizing. I don't know how you manage to make every chapter so electric, with their emotion and longing and want. It's an amazing talent.
Author's Response: Thank you - that's a beautiful thing to say. I'm not sure if its talent, or practice, or having a very, very vivid imagination. Probably a little of each!
[Report This]Date: 05/13/2011 12:26:16 AM Title: Morning glories
This was completely worth the wait. I love the way their relationship is shaping up, and your version of Jubilee is awesome. So many people forget she's not the airhead she sometimes pretends to be.
Author's Response: Glad you thought so! And I do enjoy writing Jubilee - not sure if I got the mallrat persona quite right yet, but there's still time :D
[Report This]Date: 05/13/2011 12:10:12 AM Title: Morning glories
Love your Jubilee - very spot on!
The one person who actually gave a shit about him. The one woman who wanted more than the animal. The one, he admitted, as he looked into her eyes. And wasn’t that a fucking terrifying thought.
Did you hear that?
That was the sigh that escaped me when I read that line. Beautiful stuff - your words are mind candy. I loved this chapter, well worth the wait! :)
Author's Response: Oh, that makes it all worthwhile. I must admit I hate those chapters that don't just jump out at you ... I second guessed myself a lot on this one, but the fact that people like it makes me trust me instincts that bit more. It's so tempting to gallop for the happy ending, but this story is a bit too complex for an easy resolution ... so I feel the need to deliver some sighworthy moments along the way ;)