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[Report This]Date: 06/29/2011 9:07:45 AM Title: Unpredictable
Woah.
That was almost TOO hot (if there can be such a thing...)
Sexy and heartbreaking - the line Maire keeps wanting to draw between her and Rogue, and Logan's insistance that she accept the Marie in her...just...wow.
Incredible depth here, as is par for the course when it comes to your writing. As for Mystique and Magneto - I can see how it would be possible. To me, Rogue is the most complex character out of all the X-Men and her roots should reflect that.
Trust me, Logan, she prayed. Let me fucking worship you.
***burnt offerings left at the alter of Rogan*** :)
Date: 06/29/2011 5:47:10 AM Title: Unpredictable
*fans self*
soooooo hotttt!!!
[Report This]Date: 06/28/2011 5:38:48 PM Title: Unpredictable
A supplicant at the temple of Logan. I like it. :)
One thing caught my eye: Logan's hands are cuffed to the chair throughout, right? How does he reach out to fast-forward the security footage? Or did I miss a line where Rogue uncuffed one hand? (Your stories pull me along so well that it's possible I missed a phrase someplace.)
And as for Mystique... the plot thickens. I like that you kept her as Rogue's mother but switched it over to a biological relationship. And Magento as the father...! That just adds a whole dimension of messed up.
I'm eager to see the next installment.
Author's Response: Oh, sharp eyed readers! Nope, you missed nothing. I thoroughly screwed up. It seemed a good idea at the time, and I simply was too focused on having fewer typos this time to pick up on big things, like Logan's magical ability to escape handcuffs :P Or perhaps he used his third hand :D Re Mystique and Magneto ... I just saw First Class yesterday, and now I'm really eager to play with that Xavier/Mystique/Magneto dynamic some more.
Date: 06/28/2011 2:00:40 AM Title: Unpredictable
Nice chapter, Very very nice! I think someone’s deep in their comfort zone when they write the smut ;)
When the camera’s were first mentioned I thought Jean might get caught out…Hmmm I’m getting ahead of myself but the $#I} has gotta hit the fan at some point and I have to say I’m looking forward to it…..might have to wait a bit though with mystique’s revelations must remember everything has its time, patience is a virtue etc etc. God this waiting lark kills me every time (in a very good way!)
He flicked his thumb at the monitor, and tapped the screen to rerun the footage. – cant for the life of me work out how when he’s handcuffed to the chair? Mind you it was late at night when I read this what did I miss?
Author's Response: Comfort zone - um, yes. Just call me a literary slut ;) Seriously, though, I happen to think sex is one of the most primal urges we have, and how we deal with it - and how it deals with us - can be very revealing.rnrnAs for the other - holy continuity glitch, Batman. This is what happens when I don't write with a beta. Mea culpa!
Date: 06/27/2011 1:04:00 PM Title: Unpredictable
GAH!!!
My mind has just been blown away....waiting for it to come back.....
Pepper
Date: 06/27/2011 3:06:17 AM Title: Unpredictable
Gasp.
Faints...
Author's Response: Throws water over you. (Better yet, I'll throw water over Wolverine, that'll wake us ALL up!)