Reviews For Violence and Sugar
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Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2011 1:28:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Intense and compelling, but ouch is right!

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked (even if it is a bit painful!)

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2011 5:49:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yeah, gotta add my vote... OUCH!! About 6 feet tall in flashing red neon for tje whole world to see...damn that man!

Author's Response: Yeah, I find myself hoping he gets hell for it later! Thanks for the review :-)

Reviewer: annie77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2011 2:37:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

And again, ouch. Poor Marie :(

Author's Response: I feel bad for her as well. *sad face* Thanks for commenting!!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2011 12:59:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

So, then, he wasn't ever hers at all. Ouch. Great last line, even if it did crush my heart like a grape in a wine press. --Wendie

Author's Response: "he wasn't ever hers at all" I know. *sad sigh* I feel kind of awful for her in this piece, and a little ticked at Logan as well. Surprised the hell outta me when he decided to pull that crap while I was writing this. Glad that you liked, and thanks for commenting!!

Reviewer: litlen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2011 2:49:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

Have to disagree with Marie’s version of ‘real’ especially after that last line [which was brilliant by btw] ! Kinda agree with Jaq - ouch seems such a great word and sums it up quite nicely!
Wrfa says 487 My word says 496 plus 3 for title = 499 [close enough!]

Very nicely done, thanks for posting x

Author's Response: Yeah, I think Marie's version of real and mine might differ a bit as well, but what can you do? I'm glad that you liked it, and that last line stood out to you. Sure surprised the hell out of me when I first wrote it down! (The word count things are all messed up! Both FFN and Ao3 list the word count as LONGER than 500. *head desk*) As always, thanks for reading and commenting!!

Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2011 12:41:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ouch. Severely fucking ouch. But so worth the effort ... her, and you ;) A truly lovely piece of writing. (But - ouch!!!!)

Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm glad you liked, and yeah, I think 'ouch' sums it up well! I know that's how I was feeling when I finished writing. Very pouty face at what Logan did.

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