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Reviewer: silverthorne Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2021 8:49:19 AM Title: The Bet

So, she won the bet and he still found out what happened with her that day...which results in 'how' she won that bet. She kept Logan off balance, sure, but he certainly regained his footing at the end! Great handling of these characters!

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2016 1:30:42 PM Title: The Bet

I have loved this story for EVER!!  I know damn good and well that I've sung your praises over it, so I'm really wondering where in the hell my review is!! 


THIS is simply amazing!!  I'm right there with them; in the boat house, feeling the melancholy, the concern, the worry. At the bar, the distraction, the fantasies, and then.... the OHSH!T moment! It was fantastic!  Marie's shyness, not sure how he'd take her 'cheat', then the light finally going off in HIS head... A deal, after all, IS a deal!!

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2013 6:22:13 AM Title: The Bet

Fantastic! Very sexy, glad to see rogue using jeans powers for good, and not evil. Hee! Great fic!

Reviewer: Shanibelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2011 3:38:43 AM Title: The Bet



That was so hot. Gluggggjkwjnjdakaeteaje... I'm totally drooling over Logan drooling over Marie. (Wait. Ergo, I'm drooling over Marie? Yeah, let's forget that part. Hah!)

That was amazing, dear... and oh-so-nice foreplay. ;)

Reviewer: Crisis Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2011 12:37:18 PM Title: The Bet

Cool! Really enjoyed this

Reviewer: atmd Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2011 10:54:22 AM Title: The Bet

Ah! I love the twist ending. Really good mix of sweet and sexy and angsty. And the very idea of lumberjack Logan--hmmmm. :)

Reviewer: litlen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2011 4:49:39 PM Title: The Bet

Best short I’ve read in ages.....loved it.
well done x

Author's Response: Aw, you're so sweet -- thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Mae Stark Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2011 5:08:57 PM Title: The Bet

This is just... Wow.
Probably one of the best Wolverine/Rogue fics I've read so far. Your Logan is characterized so well. Beautiful job!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it -- thanks so much for reviewing! I always have a harder time with Logan's point-of-view than with Marie's, so it's so great to hear that you thought the characterization was well done. Thanks!

Reviewer: nicca Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2011 2:10:17 AM Title: The Bet

The only challenge I have in my head would require a lot of chapters, possibly ;)

But it's a crossover unfortunately, X-men and the Avengers haha

Author's Response: Doh! I don't mind a longer challenge, but I don't know anything about the Avengers. :-) Look forward to reading it if you write it, though!

Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2011 7:28:57 AM Title: The Bet

I just came back to review and saw this was actually complete. Disappointed face. But then I told myself, the anticipation's the thing! The move from melancholy to playful to confident to "no shortage of ideas". Very nice indeed, and I promise not to demand a sequel. So this is me, not demanding. At all. *whimpers*

Author's Response: Aw, sorry, but the challenge was for a one-shot, so I think there it will stay. Besides, I already wrote a Logan-and-Marie-getting-it-on-while-she-has-Jean's-telepathy sex scene in The Target, it might be too much of a rehash. Up for a new challenge if you have one, though, this one was fun!

Reviewer: Melancholy Rogue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2011 4:52:09 PM Title: The Bet

love, love, loved it!

Author's Response: So glad you liked it! Logan tends to be..."masterful," for lack of a better words, so it was fun to write him as being continually thrown off-balance for once!

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2011 2:05:00 PM Title: The Bet

NICE! Loved it!

Author's Response: So glad you liked it...thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: nicca Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2011 2:46:38 AM Title: The Bet

Um. That was CLASSIC!!! You should've seen the reaction from when you let us know that she had Jean's powers!


Author's Response: So glad you liked it, and that the "reveal" took you by surprise. I appreciate the calls for a sequel, but I don't think it's going to happen. I'm up for a new challenge, though!

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2011 9:52:23 PM Title: The Bet

oh and what a deal! very nice

Author's Response: Yeah, innocent little Marie really snuck one by Logan, didn't she? ;-) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2011 4:02:00 PM Title: The Bet

I was just thinking about you and rereading The Target this morning. I really like this. It begs for a sequel but I see why you ended it where you did.

Author's Response: Aw, so sweet to know that people actually think my stories worth a re-read. I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2011 2:54:38 PM Title: The Bet

Love it ^-^

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: QueenC86 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2011 1:55:48 PM Title: The Bet

God old Marie, played him. This was such a great story, sad that we dont get to see what happens in the boathouse, HINT HINT

Author's Response: I know, I'm a hopeless tease in this story. And you know I love the smut as much as anyone, but I figure a boathouse scene would just be them doing all the things Logan imagined, so I've already tipped my hand there. ;-)

Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2011 1:40:11 PM Title: The Bet

Can you hear that?

It's the sound of me clapping, way up here in Canada - Holy moses woman, what is it with you and your extraordinary ability to transport me directly into your stories? You, quite simply, put me in awe. You need to get published (assuming you aren't already) because this kind of talent needs to be celebrated beyond our tiny piece of the world.

Saying that I loved this does not come close to how I really feel.

***claps again***

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much...I'm so glad you liked it. And the stuff I'm actually published for would bore you to tears, so if you have an extra book deal hanging around, send it my way! ;-)

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2011 1:36:56 PM Title: The Bet

Loved it, loved it, loved it!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2011 1:11:19 PM Title: The Bet

Awesome! Loved the UST and the bet. Is it wrong that I was a little disappointed that you ended it there? ;)This is yet another excellent story that you created--very sweet and sexy. Reading it again and knowing the outcome, I can see the subtle clues that she really does know exactly what he's thinking. And the ending was just perfect! I know you just posted this new story but I can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! And such a compliment -- that was exactly what I was going for, for it to be apparent in subsequent readings that it is Logan's thoughts that are making her sad/shudder/smile but not so obviously as for it to be apparent on the first reading. I'm glad you liked the ending. Yeah, I know I teased and stopped before it got truly smutastic, but I figure a second boathouse chapter would be them just doing all the things Logan imagined, so I could safely leave that to the reader to fill in the blanks. ;-)

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2011 12:35:57 PM Title: The Bet

HA! She played him! Loved that she cheated. Great story!

Author's Response: :-D Thanks for reviewing!

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