Reviews For Stray
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Reviewer: WolvieDoesItBest Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2012 6:31:13 AM Title: Silk

Ohhh, I felt so bad for Stray!!! Reaching out to help fix his shirt and then he shot her down like a crossbow dart to her heart, only to get the shirt from the wolf... Wow!

Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2011 10:53:11 PM Title: Silk

My favorite line from this one:
Its loping gait somehow mournful, or maybe just embarrassed.

Author's Response: thanks for the review love

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2011 9:16:36 PM Title: Silk

"...hope that this whets the appetite for more..."

That it did indeed!

I really enjoyed their interaction in this chapter--how Stray continues to be so drawn to Logan and can't seem to stop reaching out to him. I am really looking forward to seeing how their relationship continues to develop.

Also, you said that this story is coming easier/faster for you to write, which all I have to about that is, "Thank God!" because I'm already impatiently waiting for the next chapter!

Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2011 2:48:23 AM Title: Silk

I'm SEEING this story, for some reason. Not just picturing the scenes, but actually seeing it in those deep-washed colours, all dark red and golds and deep greens ... the silk, of course. Beautiful, beautiful language, so evocative and rich and perfectly matched to the story; and then there's the tale itself, which is heading in a new and fascinating direction. Honestly, a masterwork.

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2011 9:51:30 PM Title: Silk

I'm finding this quite fascinating and am very curious to see where you take it. Carry on! ;)

Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2011 8:34:03 PM Title: Silk

Utterly perfect. I have never wanted to be a cigarette more in my life - lol!

And yet, you continue to maintain the beautiful tapestry here with this chapter. I am so happy you are popping these out so quickly. You are a master.

Reviewer: litlen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2011 1:12:27 PM Title: Silk

You stopped again – I swore again – you’d think I’d be more at ease with this chapter reading lark by now but alas I’m still as impatient as ever. Seriously – thank you for the quick update feel free to continue at that speed! Another great chapter, loving the uniqueness, its working really well for me. Well done x

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