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Ohhh, I felt so bad for Stray!!! Reaching out to help fix his shirt and then he shot her down like a crossbow dart to her heart, only to get the shirt from the wolf... Wow!
My favorite line from this one:
Its loping gait somehow mournful, or maybe just embarrassed.
Author's Response: thanks for the review love
"...hope that this whets the appetite for more..."
That it did indeed!
I really enjoyed their interaction in this chapter--how Stray continues to be so drawn to Logan and can't seem to stop reaching out to him. I am really looking forward to seeing how their relationship continues to develop.
Also, you said that this story is coming easier/faster for you to write, which all I have to about that is, "Thank God!" because I'm already impatiently waiting for the next chapter!
I'm SEEING this story, for some reason. Not just picturing the scenes, but actually seeing it in those deep-washed colours, all dark red and golds and deep greens ... the silk, of course. Beautiful, beautiful language, so evocative and rich and perfectly matched to the story; and then there's the tale itself, which is heading in a new and fascinating direction. Honestly, a masterwork.
I'm finding this quite fascinating and am very curious to see where you take it. Carry on! ;)
Utterly perfect. I have never wanted to be a cigarette more in my life - lol!
And yet, you continue to maintain the beautiful tapestry here with this chapter. I am so happy you are popping these out so quickly. You are a master.
You stopped again – I swore again – you’d think I’d be more at ease with this chapter reading lark by now but alas I’m still as impatient as ever. Seriously – thank you for the quick update feel free to continue at that speed! Another great chapter, loving the uniqueness, its working really well for me. Well done x