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Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2011 8:17:30 PM Title: Meeting the Wolf

LOL, I didn't mean reviews I "owed" you in exchange for the ones you left me...I'm just reading on my phone a lot lately, and when I have the laptop I end up writing on my story instead, so I try to keep a mental list of all the chapters I've read and haven't reviewed so I can "pay back" when I get a chance. Like now. :-D So hard to pick a favorite line from this one, I narrowed it down to a few:
A couple of steps back the way she’d come bringing her to a trail of blood and wolf prints which slithered through the snow.
Tracing his claws- so sharp- his shaggy coat luxurious beneath her fingers. The warmth of his belly, his chest calling to her. The shape of him like a puzzle she had to solve in the dark.

Author's Response: hey, thanks for the review and glad you're enjoying this. i gotta say, the bit in the woods was lots of fun to write (snow, wolf, maiden, UST, what's not to love about that set-up?) am blushing from your review, thanks and so glad you enjoyed it. hobbits away, hey!

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2011 7:18:01 PM Title: Meeting the Wolf

I'm thoroughly enchanted by this! I loved their interaction -sweet and sexy. Nice touch with the phoenix feather at the end too. Can't wait for the next chapter. Seriously.

Reviewer: Tamana Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2011 7:29:26 AM Title: Meeting the Wolf

for now, I'm just gonna write "great" till I come with something better.
Will be looking forward to read a new chapter.

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2011 9:36:03 PM Title: Meeting the Wolf

I wanted to let you know how much I am loving the way you are growing the threat to them as well as the way you are bonding them together. I just hope the 'safe place' really is safe.

Reviewer: litlen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2011 3:38:57 PM Title: Meeting the Wolf

Decking gold goes without saying, decking red is just something I seem always compelled to do! No-one and I mean no-one has been able to persuade me otherwise yet!! You may have split her completely but I have trouble seeing the two halfs as ‘different’ don’t worry its just me :) Red could say hello in the nicest possible way and I’d see the condescending bitch screaming underneath - it’s just how it is!!

Fantastic chapter full of wonderful descriptions, the visuals whilst reading were off the scale good especially the oak tree scene. However, will you refrain from stopping! Your too damn good at these endings leaving us all shouting ‘Nooooooooooo whats gonna happen, you can’t leave it there!’ I therefore vote that you forget RL for a while and just keep going until the end. (I think my impatience is improving don’t you think?) :)

Fav: “There’s not a body in the world can be blamed for being what they were born to be,”

Reviewer: Katya Jade Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2011 1:47:53 PM Title: Meeting the Wolf

Great update!

Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2011 10:55:07 AM Title: Meeting the Wolf

The terror of everyone - the bravery of Ororo (I wish she hadn't hurt him, though I understand she had no choice) and the woman scorned in your witchy Mistress Gold.

How much fun is this?!

“And blood?” The eyes moved nearer from the shadows. “You take no fright at the notion of being decked in that too?”

Scary and yet so freakin' sexy. Little girl, little girl, the time to flee is right now. But then again, maybe that warning applies to Logan, hmm? Love. This. I am such a sucker for fairy tales, especially dark interpretations of them. This is so wonderful, seriously.

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