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Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2011 9:24:40 PM Title: Sunlight

So many great lines in this -- Ororo just rocks:

“Though be sure to make Logan work for that admission; he’s far too used to grinning and getting what he wants from a lass.”

"I meant that he would skulk around telling you the whole truth."

I feel dense, but am I supposed to know who T’Challa is/was?

Author's Response: t'challa is the real name of the black panther, storm's husband in the comics and all-around master of kick-ass. sorry, assumed everyone would know (which just shows i spend too much time reading about the marvel universe...) glad you liked ororo, she's a lot cooler in the comics than she wa sin the movie.

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2011 11:05:07 PM Title: Sunlight

RL?! I hate it when RL interferes with the Rogan-verse! Repeat after me, "I will devote myself to writing Rogan fanfiction and forsake all others, especially RL!" Good, I'm glad that's settled.:-P

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2011 6:01:21 AM Title: Sunlight

Another excellent chapter! I really loved the explanation of the Moonlight Key and the Sunlight Lock, very romantic and totally in keeping with the fairy tale vibe.

And as with all your stories, I love how you are able to weave in other characters from the Marvel Universe. Great back story with T'Challa and Ro!

And here's some more great writing that I need to point out because it totally blew me away:

"So slowly, gingerly, she wrapped her arms around him, the feel of his fur comforting against her cheek as she burrowed in. The sound of his heart a tattooed lullaby beating beneath his chest. The warmth of him making her shiver in an entirely different way. Taking a deep breath she let her eyes droop closed, feeling unaccountably safe between the tender paws of her loving wolf-"

Damn! Just, yeah...wow!

So the Moonlight Key and the Sunlight Lock have been revealed. Now we just need to find out what's going on with the threat from Mistress Gold The Stalker. Well, two out of three ain't bad. ;)

Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2011 10:21:05 AM Title: Sunlight

:(

Now this chapter made me all kinds of sad. Poor, poor Ororo. You brought in T'Challa (the first time I have ever read it in fanfic, Roganwise) and the comic-fan in me just about melted in contentment. What a phenomenal job. You still made him so very powerful, despite the outcome, so major kudos to you for that.

I especially like the connection Stray now has with Logan. What an extra-ordinary story you have going here, did I already tell you how addicted I am to it? :)

Reviewer: litlen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2011 11:25:35 AM Title: Sunlight

‘Patience is a virtue’, yeah yeah ….I’m working on it…..bloody unsuccessfully I might add with these endings! And then you say you’re disappearing into RL? I really should be nice :) you’ve been great with updates and I’m really only pulling your leg but still….. RL? Do you really have too?!!!!

Great chapter, liked your explanation of moonlight key and sunlight lock, very in keeping with the whole magical, mythical feel. Still absolutely loving it, still want more, still gonna pester you ;)

Fav.:- ‘The sound of his heart a tattooed lullaby beating beneath his chest’

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