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Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2011 10:41:21 AM Title: The Begot-Of-Trouble and the Trouble-Begot

Aw, this chapter was so sweet. And good for Stray for declaring what she wants. Logan was extra cute in this one. Love him trying to be tactful: He shrugged. “You would have to share this place with me,” he said. The damn blush came back with a vengeance, and the ghost of a smile formed in Logan’s lips. “You would have to boast of your love fer me, say you were mine. And we would have to let it be known that we were- that we were in the way of lovers.”

Author's Response: he tries to be tactful, but he never really gets there. he is very cute when he tries though. thanks for the review though

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2011 1:51:56 PM Title: The Begot-Of-Trouble and the Trouble-Begot

Hooray everybody! I also didn't actually realize that Rogue was still a virgin after that night. I really need to stop devouring your chapters and try to pay a little more attention. I have a problem though, each time Stray updates I feel like a puppy who has heard the kibble bag. I don't don't can't don't want to wait a second longer. Thank you for the awesome dose of awesome.

~Mia

Author's Response: hey mia, glad you're enjoying this. you gotta love a little girl on wolf action, lol. there's more smut on the way soon so don't despair, stray won't be in her pickle for much longer... again, glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review.

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2011 10:19:57 AM Title: The Begot-Of-Trouble and the Trouble-Begot

i like it when they say "Aye" :-D xXx

Author's Response: me too! thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2011 11:23:54 PM Title: The Begot-Of-Trouble and the Trouble-Begot

Goddamn, this was a sweet chapter! Great little conversation over Logan's clumsy (yet sweet) attempt to protect her.

I gotta say, I like how Stray thinks:

“Can I share your bed?” she asked him.

Why that is an excellent question, my dear! ;)

I love how she then just layed it all on the line and was completely truthful about how she feels about him, despite how he has tried to discourage her in the past:

"But as much as I know my own mind, I understand that this is your decision, Logan. If you ever… want me, really want me, we can see what’s between us. But I’ve spent too much of my life having others decide for me to try to decide for you.”

And how can you not love Logan with this line:

“Then you go to sleep, my little Trouble-Begot, and I will watch you over you.”

Great way to end it too.

Author's Response: i have to say, i like the way that stray thinks too. as for laying it on the line, i guess this is supposed to be about someone taking charge of their own destiny (eventually) so not wanting to take away logan's choice is a big part of that. and yeah, pretty much don't see how you can't love logan after this chapter. thanks for the review, hope you enjoy the next. hobbits away, hey!

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2011 7:13:40 PM Title: The Begot-Of-Trouble and the Trouble-Begot

AH! We need another cave scene, pronto! Some nice Logan Stray smut! lol
Poor Kitty....
Great update! Keep them coming, this story is very entertaining!

Author's Response: patience, woman! patience! it's on the way... thanks for the review :-)

Reviewer: litlen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2011 10:48:19 AM Title: The Begot-Of-Trouble and the Trouble-Begot

Definite ahhh factor! The big ol lug is still putting his foot in it but getting it better than right in the end. Seriously lovely convo. Great chapter blah blah loving it blah blah - am running out of ways to tell you how great this is! looking forward to more x

Author's Response: i do love to make logan put his foot in it, as anyone who has read "jitters," can attest. glad you enjoyed the conversation- though it is going to come back and bite logan on the behind next chapter- and thanks as always for the review. hobbits away, hey

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2011 1:23:52 AM Title: The Begot-Of-Trouble and the Trouble-Begot

beautiful, this entire chapter made me smile.

Author's Response: i;m glad to hear it love, thanks for the review. :-)

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