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Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2011 11:02:19 AM Title: Into the Echoing Green

Things are heating up! I love this part:
Some days he seemed unwilling to let her out of his sight, as if afraid she would be spirited away. Some days he seemed afraid to even touch her, as if somehow his hands would harm her by some unaccountable means.

Author's Response: i just wish i could get to the hot part, but there's a little bit more to go before i can let them get it on. glad you're enjoying them though.

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2011 1:05:21 AM Title: Into the Echoing Green

“She could do better, my dear,” Shaw was telling Emmalaine, “Much, much better. But Spring Maids and their wolves won’t be parted, every old maid knows that.”

Emmalaine’s smile was pure venom. “That, my love, remains to be seen.”

Yeah, having those two talk about Stray like that is DEFINITELY not good.

Now I'm off to read "Little Boy Lost" and get caught up on Firefly (thank you Hulu.com!). I'm a sucker for imaginary bananas...

Author's Response: i *think* it's "little boy lost," but it could be "little girl lost," either- blake, not so much with the big, showy poem titles. get back to me with the firefly reference and you will have all the imaginary bananas i can muster. and i agree, being the target of the gruesome twosome's dating advice NEVER bodes well... thanks for the review!

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2011 11:37:31 AM Title: Into the Echoing Green

I almost missed the Firefly ref. Love that show. I want to have its babies. Also? This story kicks ass. So thank you for that.

~Mia

Author's Response: i too want to have "firefly," babies. glad you're enjoying the story ;-)

Reviewer: Katya Jade Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2011 6:08:25 PM Title: Into the Echoing Green

Nice chapter. Love the descriptions. And I have a feeling there will be something happening with scarves soon enough.

Author's Response: you're not wrong about the scarves... glad you're enjoying the descriptions.

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2011 1:31:14 AM Title: Into the Echoing Green

I spot "truthsome" and "very fine," for starters, to say nothing of House Madrassa. :)

(Oops, hit Submit too soon.)

I'm enjoying this. You seem to be having a lot of fun with it, and it shows. Very cool reimagining.

Author's Response: you actually spotted two i hadn't realised i put in there so kudos (and imaginary bananas) to you. you're right, i am enjoying myself so i'm glad it comes across, and i'm happy that you're enjoying it. thanks for the review.

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2011 1:12:20 AM Title: Into the Echoing Green

OOOOHHHH the plot thickens. I would bet Logan didn't take into account that Shaw might have an interest in Stray. I have to say I giggle about the word chatelaine. It my non-profit group it is the position that welcomes newcomers, see why it makes me giggle??? :)

Still loving it.

Author's Response: yeah, i see why it makes you giggle ;-P my best friend's a medieval history graduate and she told me that in norman areas a chatelaine was what the lord of the manor called his mistress: she was usually the woman he really loved but he had to marry his wife for dynastic reasons. and i agree, i don't think it computes in logan's brain that someone might try to become his rival. i mean, what kind of masochistic, suicidal guy would do that? (coughs, *Sebastian Shaw*) thanks for the review, glad you're still loving it. hope you like the next. H

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2011 12:07:25 AM Title: Into the Echoing Green

Ugh, I just want to smack those two. To be honest, I want to do more then smack. Congrats for making your characters piss me off. LOL.
Love it! And, uh, I wouldn't mind a little PDA from Logan. Heh... ;)

Author's Response: if you wanna smack them imagine what logan wants to do... glad i made the terrible twosome suitably annoying, lol. and thanks for the review. Oh, and there's some major PDA on its way... whistles innocently.... just so you know...

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