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Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2011 2:40:38 PM Title: Ars Amatoria

Nailed it.

~Mia

Author's Response: really? cheers!

Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2011 11:24:00 AM Title: Ars Amatoria

Even though it's Evil-Not-Logan, I still found this image so engaging -- you manage to paint such vivid pictures in so few words:

“Did you now?” He made a show of scratching his chin with one hand, gloves and silk transferred to his other.

Author's Response: again, you're making me blush. cheers!

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2011 1:16:47 AM Title: Ars Amatoria

You did a great job with this chapter without being gratuitous.

This line made me made me say, "aww" for so many reasons - poor Stray being put through the ringer and yet how sweet is Logan?!

"The man Stray knew to be the real Logan held his arms out to her and she curled up in his lap and wept."

Damn, I love this story!

Author's Response: thanks for that, i was a bit worried. i have issues with using sexual assault merely as a plot device (but not murder or arson. i sometimes wonder why that is.)It seemed to fit in this story, if for no other reason than the shaw in the comics is a big, prurient ole perv. glad you're enjoying it, and yes, i think the logan in this story's sweet. in fact he'd probably my favourite version of wolvie so far... oh, for a weirdly enchanted, steam-punk elizabethan manor house of my own... cheers for the review!

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2011 5:00:49 PM Title: Ars Amatoria

WOW! :0 Damn, Stray....I have a feeling shes out of the pot and into the fire now.

Author's Response: and aren't you looking forward to finding what happens next? thanks for the review...

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2011 3:39:30 AM Title: Ars Amatoria

well somebody had some help from Emma or Gold but somehow I don't think it was Shaw. Humm I wonder who that was and I wonder where Logan and Strya are going to sleep tomoorow night cause I bet it won't be seperate.

Author's Response: you bet your darndest they won't... and you're right, there's more to this than just shaw being a dick... the thick plottens!

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