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Reviewer: atmd Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2011 12:40:47 PM Title: Chapter 4

Aw. And in the span of 3000 words you take me from schadenfreude to genuine sympathy. Poor Jean =/. I do like how dynamic the characters are in this--Jean, Scott, Rogue, Logan--all of them changing and trying to cope with that change. Good stuff. Your dialogue is great too, easy to read and I can really hear their voices come through. Can't wait to read more soon :)

Author's Response: Thank you! And you taught me a new word. :p I'm glad you like it, I'm really enjoying writing this and I'm happy you all are likeing where it's going. :)

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