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Reviewer: atmd Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2011 5:14:35 PM Title: Chapter 11

"Don't push it. Don't scare her. Don't say she looks fucking incredible because she's alive and she's here and you want her more in this second than you've ever wanted anyone in your life."

Awww! Gah, so many great moments in this chapter. Loved the conversation with Jubilee. I don't usually like fan fic Jubes, but you did her justice :).

The very thought of Hank, Logan, and Rogue high on nitrous oxide had me giggling.

Gosh dangit woman! You finally had me smiling through a chapter, and you go and end it with another damned cliffhanger. Hmpf. Oh well. It's worth it. I'm still lovin' this story :P.

Author's Response: I know, I really am kind of ending with cliffhangers. It's an evil habit. :p

Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2011 9:31:30 AM Title: Chapter 11

Eek.

Lots of stuff happening here - heartbreak for Logan, for Rogue, even for Scott. The mark is gone? Great spin, now Logan needs to prove himself to Rogue which is always fun. At least the attraction remains - maybe he needs to be a little aggressive to get her to accept their past before someone like Scott can jump in and cause a blockage.

As usual, you have me in stitches over Jubilee, AND Hank (nice twinkie touch by the way, LOL)!

And then, you finish off with those horrific, spectacular cliff hangers of yours...evil girl! Keep it up! :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm doing some experimenting here so I'll see what kind of twisted hoops my mind is going to make Marie and Logan jump through. So far their feral connection has been severed, so Logan's going to have to work at wooing Marie a little harder. ;)rnrnI love writing Jubilee and Hank, they're so much fun.rnrnThank you for your wonderful feedback! Xx

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