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[Report This]Date: 08/17/2011 4:03:22 AM Title: On delicate wings
I'm sitting alone in my living room at 4:02 AM, reading this story, and this specific line:
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... made me laugh right out loud!
Date: 08/15/2011 5:53:17 PM Title: On delicate wings
Loved it. Pandora is in my opinion one of the most fascinating myths in the Greek Antiquity. Can't wait to see what you have in store for our favorite pair! Free
Date: 08/15/2011 5:33:26 PM Title: On delicate wings
Loved Logan’s thoughts and her regret at peeking - Great chapter but again with the last line…………really wish you weren’t quite so good at them!! But you are so here I am twiddling my thumbs waiting patiently (or as close to patient as I can manage) for the next instalment x
‘such a fucking fucked fucker.’ Ok so I have to admit this made me laugh…..don’t think I’ve heard it put quite that way before so 10/10 for originality and one of the best descriptions I’ve read!!
Author's Response: I know, the cliffhangers. I can't help myself. It's like I hear a bell clanging at the point or something. It feels necessary ...rnrnFFF - I just had to use it - its probably not very in character, or something the Americans/Canadians say, but the Irish are big on "fooker" and I once had one of my cousins pin me with a really woeful glance and just MOAN that line. (Yes, it was in relation to a girl!) Have wanted to use it ever since, and it seemed to fit so well in here ...
Date: 08/15/2011 2:44:56 PM Title: On delicate wings
I think it's amazing! I love what you've done so far, great writing as always and interesting plot that grabs and sucks me in until I'm dumped at the end of page waiting for the next one. Thank you! I really like the Pandora stuff, and Logan's point of view reminds of that statistic that men think about sex every 3 seconds or something, it's just spot-on writing.
Author's Response: Glad you like it - and yes, that statistic came to mind for me, too. Logan's a lusty beastie ;)
[Report This]Date: 08/15/2011 12:13:34 PM Title: On delicate wings
Whew, Pandora's box is right. That was hot. But then . . . this kind of broke my heart. A lot:
As real as it gets, he'd said. And suddenly, she was cold, and regretful, even as her sated limbs began to flush with the heat from the fire.
Because Logan might have wanted her, but he had fought it. Hadn't wanted this. And she had taken it anyway.
It's like . . . she stole his sense of honor from him or something. So sad. I am absolutely on pins and needles to see how the rest of this unfolds.
That last line left me a little worried . . . *peeks from behind fingers* Is it too much to hope for a happy ending?
Author's Response: I think this will have a happy ending. Or, at least, not an unhappy one. Might not be a pat resolution, but "hope" is a big part of it, I think. She's not one to give up, like Pandora!
[Report This]Date: 08/15/2011 10:26:55 AM Title: On delicate wings
What I think is that this is great. I love the concept that Marie has resisted looking at Logan's memories until now. Of course, the Cure is looming over all of it... kind of like death. Or taxes. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, the Cure is looming. But is that hope, or is that one of the evils, one wonders *evil chuckle*
[Report This]Date: 08/15/2011 10:15:57 AM Title: On delicate wings
Uhm where is the rest? I need more!
Evil, so evil!!!
MORE soon... like now... can't wait
Author's Response: Sorry. Sorry. I'm writing this one superfast to try and exorcise it so I can get on with Sleeping Dogs ... I should be able to get to it tomorrow so look for a chappy in another 48 hours or so. (Sorry!)