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great story!!!!!! hope you continue itand rogue finds out about how he feels. i had a crazy thought that when they get to from him meeting rogue to just before they stared, logan telepathically asks charles to make it so ONLY rogue sees what he feels for her not the others as well. weird or what?
like i said hope you continue it soon.
Yes! A new Chapter. Now my day is good. ^^
That's a risk they have to take. I think it's more likely for Marie to bring him back than for anyone else.
19th century... Boys had to grow up fast this time. Besides, most of today's 14 years-old boys wouldn't want to play with their 7 years-old brother, too.
Well, this "conversation" looked like there was still something going between Creed and James' mother. And I'm not sure whether Elizabeth wanted this or not.
That have to be indications for his mutation. Wikipedia says that ferals have not only enhanced senses but also higher strenght. The latter isn't often mentioned. Nice detail.
The typical little-brother-problem. He'll get over it. Okay, maybe not... Was that the first sign of the Wolverine?
Seems to me that James spent more time with Victor than with his father or brother. Significant.
Ough. Poor family. How will they deal with the death of John jr.?
SPOILER for everyone who doesn't know the Origings movie:
Sorry to disappoint you guys, but that was just the first horrible event in Logan's life.
So, after arguing with myself for at least 30 minutes, I registered only to write this review...
I should stop liking fanfictions that much.
Okay, back to topic.
I'm really impressed by your idea and your writing style. It's easy to put yourself into Logan's shoes and empathize his feelings. I'm really looking forward to the reactions of the others when they watch Logan killing his father or fighting in one of the world wars.
I hope there'll be more chapters so I didn't sign in for free.^^
And I'm sorry for any grammar mistakes I may have made.
Author's Response: WOW. I am really flatered like seriously. Thanks a lot! I am soooooooooo sorry that it has taken me FOREVER to update I have been soooo busy with school and work and life in general. Enjoy the new chapter =)
Please post additional chapters? It's been a while and I love this story...what will Logan find and when is he going to tell Marie the truth that he loves her????? This story rocks...more..more..more
Author's Response: Wow! I'm really touched that you like my story so much! Sorry it's been literally FOREVER since I last updated but I have had literally NO TIME to do anything but school/work but winter break is coming up so I should be having some more free time and I will try harder to get these chapter's updated. Keep letting me know how I'm doing and let me know if stuff is making sense! Thanks a bunch!
I like that the professor called in the team to help with the unveiling of Logan's memories. I hadn't ever really thought about him flipping out as a result, so bravo on a great plot point. And, like Xavier, I am surprised that Logan admitted his feelings for Rogue. I think Logan might have surprised himself with that one! I look forward to the answer to that last question... --Wendie
Author's Response: Why thank you! I will try my best now to answer those questions as fast as possible! Thanks for the review!
The hints at Logan's past are well done...And who doesn't like a good Rogan cuddle? I'm looking forward to the 'big stuff'... --Wendie
Author's Response: Why thank you very much, I'm trying to make stuff interesting.There are some big twisits, some from my head and then I might put some stuff from the comics in to mix it all up. And only crazy people don't like a good Rogan cuddle lol. Big stuff coming soon!
Great start. His thought process in regards to the swimsuit was cute but you've got me worried as to why he would get a headache. Please continue this, it's very interesting! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to throw some cute humor in. And I will keep posting!
awww poor logan. So as the story moved further along it improved. Great work and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: yay my first comment! i'm glad to hear it got better as i went. Hopefully it will continue to get better as I go!! thanks for the comment!