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Reviewer: Feralbites Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2015 8:26:31 PM Title: Obsession

Her annoyance and anger at him for toting her around was completely forgotten when he finally, finally, let her explore the world again. She lifted her hands above her head, breathing deeply and twirling and spinning and happy.

“Logan!” She launched herself at him. A flying mass of dirty brown hair and bright happy eyes and long mostly bare limbs that she didn’t want to cover up ever again. He caught her easily. Gathering her close and whispering to her.
*** I keep seeing her as childlike and its bugging me. But in whole I love this part. So sweet.***

And she didn’t even stop the flying thing landed in their vicinity and belched out people ***Belched out people. OMG.LOL!!!***

Author's Response: Lol she's crazy but don't worry she won't stay that way forever.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2011 9:30:02 PM Title: Obsession

So sorry you lost all your reviews! I am really liking this -- the chemistry is awesome, and I love half-mad Rogue. Please keep updating!

Author's Response: *shrugs*Eh, it's not a big deal anymore. I'm over it. *grin* Besides, I'm getting lots of loveys from everyone now, but I do suppose that things are getting more interesting. I'm trying to keep them both in the specific backgrounds that I've created for them, and have them act accordingly. I wanted to set the president early on, Logan does what he wants, when he wants, who he wants, and how he wants and doesn't take any shit from anyone about it. Marie is completely adaptable and saner than everyone believes, but it's by choice that she lives inside her head most of the time.rnrnThanks for taking the time to review, I'm so glad to be back in the fandom!

Reviewer: WolvieDoesItBest Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2011 9:00:13 PM Title: Obsession

Love, love, love this. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I thought to myself, if Marie keeps most of the old her trapped and safe and just exists on the little bit she's let out to hang with the others (the many many others) she won't remember the outside will she? And then I imagined that her world has been pretty much grey and pain and hurt up until now... and what would things look like? And who wouldn't become obsessed with it and everything else she pays attention to in this scene? So, I wrote it. Wow, that was winded. I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: g-love99 Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2011 3:44:42 PM Title: Obsession

Great updates! Love possessive Logan and happy Marie :)

Author's Response: She is. Thanks for the review! More updates coming later tonight!rn

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2011 3:23:58 PM Title: Obsession

Awwww.... I love the image of Marie just experiencing the outside. It was really sweet. and of course at the end Marie kissing Logan as the X-men got there is a really good image. More soon please.

Author's Response: *grin* More to come later today! I thought it was about time we moved the setting to someplace without chains and bars. *grin* I'm glad you liked it, and it's about time Scott got on board with the X-Jet.

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