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Reviewer: Feralbites Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2015 8:11:38 PM Title: And Now for Something Completely Different

Poor fucked up Marie. I love how Logan is all "I'll do it anyways" With his claws.

Author's Response: Yes!! He totally is. And crazy Marie is cray cray.

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Date: 10/11/2015 8:11:35 PM Title: Slow Burn

Certain as she was that her own skin could be deadly, Mare knew something so beautiful couldn’t be touched without a price to be paid. ***Sad and poetic***
She reached out slowly, so slowly, and touched the smooth skin between his knuckles where the metal knives had appeared. She stared at her own hand, her fingers making contact with someone or the first time in a long time without causing pain and ripping and tearing and sucking and… pretty yellow trim. *** Possibly my favorite chapter on the whole. Thought favorite line in the whole story is still the "she bit him" line. LOL. Loved this chapter!***

Author's Response: Yeah. It's such a poetic section. And sometimes she's so lucid it hurts.

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Date: 10/11/2015 8:08:09 PM Title: Temptation

Loved the whole chapter. But my favorite was ***“I have a name. And I need this ribbon.”***

Author's Response: Lol she's so fun and crazy and fun!

Reviewer: Feralbites Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2015 8:06:47 PM Title: Fool's Gold

“Times? I don’t seem to have my blackberry on my right now, but if you give me a minute I’ll have my secretary pull up a list of tomorrows activities and you can pour over them to your heart’s content.” She leveled a bright eyed stare at him. “Does it look like I’ve got a window? My internal clock runs on 24 hours of dimness. They like it when the bright lights make you blink and squint, it’s easier not to see them coming.”
***She seems so with it right there.***

Logan found little help in the divided attention of a bat-shit girl disgruntled about her fate ***I Can see him there thinking "Fuck" LOL ***

Author's Response: I forgot how much I loved this story! I'm going to have to read them all again! I love that last line from Logan!

Reviewer: Feralbites Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2015 8:05:07 PM Title: When it Rains

The yellow lines running along the seams were pretty. She wanted one. It was the least he could do for spoiling her escape plans ***LOL***
His mouth needed some washing out. She wasn’t sure how to talk to him. It had been so long, she tried or form coherent natural speech, instead of the erratic rapid speech she was accustomed to in her own brain.
***Aww***

Author's Response: Yeah.

Reviewer: Feralbites Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2015 8:04:06 PM Title: In The Line Of Fire

He made the best of his last few moments, radioing Scott to get the fuck outta Dodge, he’d catch up later, and killing five more of the fuckers before his eyelids closed. He lashed out with his claws in a dramatic Last Stand before unconsciousness claimed him.
***Love this Logan. The real Logan.***

Author's Response: Yes ma'am!!

Reviewer: Feralbites Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2015 8:02:26 PM Title: Bare Bones

I can't copy this whole chapter so I will just say I loved it all.

Author's Response: Lol

Reviewer: Feralbites Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2015 7:59:57 PM Title: Keeping Warm

And froze.

She was so cold, too cold, and they were cutting and hurting and burning and the patch of skin they peeled from her left arm was the only place she could focus on. Someone else spoke then, someone burned into her brain a long long time ago. The first.

That’s what you get you dirty mutie, that’s what you fucking deserve. All those things I told you, they were a lie. I only wanted to hurt you. It’s because you’re nothing. You’re lower than low, you’re not human.

Marie slid to the floor, a worthless loony girl as cold as ice. She wondered, briefly, if the man would even notice that she was gone. ***Oh. *cries* So sad.***

Author's Response: rn:(

Reviewer: Feralbites Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2015 7:58:11 PM Title: Have I Ever Steered You Wrong?

Really, what did he expect anyway, with that tan expanse of skin so close to her lips and teeth? So she bit him. *** EEEK!!!! I love it!***

Author's Response: I know! *flails*

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Date: 10/11/2015 7:56:57 PM Title: Domination

She followed carefully, minding his signals with a twitchy swiftness and calming altogether when he set a hand on some part of her ***Love it!! I forgot how batshit she is in this story!***

In the end he maintained mastery of his instincts. It would prove though, that the girl would not maintain control over hers. ***Okay now I need to read this whole thing!!!***

Reviewer: barbara87413 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2015 12:44:44 AM Title: Wonder

So glad to see more of this, I had read it awhile ago, and enjoyed it!

Reviewer: WitchBaby Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2013 1:03:33 AM Title: Wonder

rereading this for the umpteenth time and still adore it as much as the first time! i hope someday you finish it!

Reviewer: DarkDragonfly Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2013 8:55:05 PM Title: A Cunning Plan

Just letting you know that some people are still compulsively reading and re-reading this amazing work of fiction in hopes that one day you will update :)

I love this story.

Author's Response: I keep forgetting about it. Maybe I'll dive back in a little bit... Thanks for the reiew, and the nudge!rn

Reviewer: AerynsFallen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2012 9:57:09 AM Title: Wonder

please update soon! this story is addictive...

Author's Response: I was just thinking of this story today... I'll try o put out another tonight!

Reviewer: WitchBaby Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2011 3:16:50 AM Title: Wonder

please update soon!

Author's Response: I will today!

Reviewer: WitchBaby Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2011 2:54:25 AM Title: Temptation

i love the line 'despoiler of her plans.' fucking awesome.

Author's Response: *giggles* I know, right!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2011 1:56:32 PM Title: Wonder

more please

Author's Response: woking on it!

Reviewer: WitchBaby Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2011 10:43:15 PM Title: Inhospitable Lodgings

my favorite chappie, love how possessive and feral logan and his animal are about marie! the line about smelling his, looking like his and feeling like his was just perfect!!!

Author's Response: *grin* Thanks!

Reviewer: WitchBaby Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2011 10:41:12 PM Title: Wonder

i love this story more every time i read it! i'm wicked curious to see how long marie manages to stay sane this time, and if charles can help her regain more of herself. please update again soon!

Author's Response: *grin* I've got a lot in store for Charles and the gang!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2011 3:17:59 AM Title: Patience

Somehow I feel like something bad is gonna happen to marie while everyone is inside. This story keeps getting better and better. I am still lovin it. Update again soon please!

Author's Response: Now, why would you think that? It implies that I write a lot of Angst or something? That's just.... not cool. *grin* Besides I wouldn't tell you if there was now would I? Besides, this one really is up in the air. It's one that depends on the prompt... I'm indecisive about it. So... even I don't know. (Or do I?) lol

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2011 12:40:50 AM Title: Patience

ooh the plot thickens. I like it.

BTW I think you meant to write animal and not anial, right?

Author's Response: *grin* Thanks so much! (Totally fixed btw) I knew I should have gone over this one more time. I'd hate to get a beta for drabbles though. I'd need someone who was on call pretty much like I was. Ah, well. Guess I'll just have to have a keener eye, eh?

I'm glad you're liking these!

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2011 5:10:39 PM Title: Lipstick

Humm, does Marie's collar not work as well as the Uglies thought? Great name for them by the way.

Author's Response: *grin* Originally it was just that one guy, then all of the sudden she was talking to all of them. Also... *ahahaha* no spoilers for you!

Reviewer: lily5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2011 11:53:20 AM Title: A Cunning Plan

I'm afraid Jean was hate at first sight in the first movie. I simply love to detest her.

And I think even in canon she would peek into Rogue, right?

Author's Response: I honestly cannot remember. But Jean is totally trying to do her job, and protect everyone, and get a grip on someone she's pretty sure she's going to have to help in the long run. I love love/hate relationships. They're all kinds of dirty fun, lol.

Reviewer: atmd Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2011 9:54:46 AM Title: A Cunning Plan

Hey, I was sorry to see that WRFA ate your story =/. Anyway, just read the whole thing this morning (ah, the beauty of short chapters!). I'm definitely enjoying this, especially your characterization of crazy!Marie. The instant chemistry with Logan is great and I'm curious to see what will come of it now that the rest of the X-Men are thrown into the mix.

Author's Response: Thanks! I haven't had a story eaten by the WRFA before, I thought it was above that. *give the WRFA a disappointed look* I wanted o do the lab fic in drabbles for the first time because I was so afraid of mucking it all up with long detailed chapters. But I've given myself a long long list of prompts so it'll be fun. crazy!Marie is delightful, I'm thrilled writing her and figuring out her patterns and the way her psyche works. I think I started this... Wow, back in December. Remember how I said I didn't have any room to talk? The chemistry is really fun to write, I love this Logan. He's definitely not one to give two sifts about what anyone else thinks. And Marie is taking what she can get as soon as she gets her hands on it. The X-men, lol, they'll do what hey do best. Put their noses into everything. lol

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2011 5:36:10 PM Title: A Cunning Plan

I did read your responses after I posted my review. lol and actually, Terri dealt really well with the affects of Marie's amnesia on others. It was one of the reasons I love the series so much. The way she shows how much it hurt Logan and everyone else was really heartbreaking.

Honestly though with the Comis/movie/fanfic thing. I haven't read the comics. I watched the movies and was hooked on Logan and Rogue. I read the fanfic a lot though and I have learned a lot about the comics through the fanfics.

Author's Response: *grin* No problem, lol. I might have read them, and just blocked them out. That or it was freaking years ago and I just don't remember. lol But the heartbreaking part is what gets me. I'm really good at writing Angst, that acute life is terrible sadness tinged with hope that it will get better while being pretty sure that it won't, but I've got no backbone when it comes to reading it. And sometimes terri's fics drive me nuts with the whole lack of hope. And (almost) every time I read her Logan, I head Rocky, ala Sly Stallone, in my head. LOL

I watched the cartoon and read the comics when I was a kid, like.. 11 and 12, so when I was introduced to all of the X-Men it was ages before the movie. Back when Rogue was still wearing bikini's and short gloves and Ororo had an accent. I never picture Halle Berry in my head when I read her. I had never given Logan and Rogue much thought until I saw X1 then I was smacked in the face with it, mostly because the characters are so so so different from their comic counterparts. Logan is a softie compared to his comic self; there he constantly fights to keep his animal side in check, literally reigning himself in constantly to live among his friends, lovers, family. Rogue in the comics is strong, vulnerable, soft, angry and above all sacrificing. At one point she given the choice of getting her powers removed with a machine. (She's got Carol Danvers impenetrable skin, super human strength, and flight) along with her skin. Instead of getting it removed, she destroys the machine so it can't be used on those who are willing. She expects people to be careful of her, instead of the opposite, and uses her powers to save her teammates and other innocents despite the danger to herself. The difference between them is so different that as soon as I met them, I was totally on board. I could go on forever, but, if you want to email me, send me a message through the site. Soon well need out own page, lol.

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