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[Report This]Date: 11/16/2011 10:52:57 AM Title: Chapter the Fifth
I'm really enjoying this story. Your portrayal of Rogue/Marie's inner world is really unique. And the Rogue/Logan moments are just priceless. Bedtime stories and s'mores! Awww :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like the inner world. I struggled a bit with how to portray it so I'm glad it came out well. Sometimes I think I'm making Logan too sweet with Marie but then I'm like, screw it, they're having fun together, who am I to stop them?
[Report This]Date: 11/16/2011 8:50:02 AM Title: Chapter the Fourth
“Is it safe?” I joked.
“I’m more than a match for the bugs in the walls.”
“Did you have to tell me about them?” I moaned. “I was happier not knowing.”
Ha! I loved this. What a cute moment. This Logan and Rogue have such great banter. I'm liking the Rogue/Marie moments too.
And thank you, thank you, a million times thank you for not overdoing the scene in the bar where the guy came up to hit on her. So many people would've made him come up and grab her out of the blue and try to have his wicked way with her or something, LOL, but you made it really realistic. Nice. Off to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I try to just let the banter come naturally but I often get worried it doesn't come out quite right. rnrnYou make me blush with your reviews =)
[Report This]Date: 11/15/2011 6:17:53 PM Title: Chapter the Fifth
Lol i've seen that film xXx
Date: 11/08/2011 9:36:04 PM Title: Chapter the Fourth
I'm really liking this! This was particularly neat.
I needed to check on the walls before sleep. I remember thinking “barbaric” a few times during the fights so there was a possibility Erik had made a new crack somewhere.
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 10/30/2011 11:21:23 PM Title: Chapter the Third
I don't actually know how to play pool. Sorry if anyone was really looking forward to that scene.
Not sure why, but your Author's Note made me LOL. Hard.
I'm really enjoying this so far! Not sure how I missed the first couple of chapters, but I'm glad I noticed it and was able to catch up :). There are so many stories where Logan drags Marie out on the road with him; I love the twist, and her turning on the charm and hustling pool is just too great. Or perhaps it's Logan's jealousy over it that's great. Regardless, there's definite greatness in there somewhere.
“Listen, kid, I’ve been around for a while, I know the good spots,” he teased right back.
“I guess I will bow to your far greater experience in this matter,” I said gravely.
Ummm.... is it wrong that I totally took this as innuendo? =D
Great story so far! I'm liking the tone of it, lighthearted with just the right touch of angst. Looking forward to the next chapter, for sure.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you could find greatness somewhere. Your review really made me feel like I was doing a good job. I'm never sure if I get their silly banter quite right so I'm excited to hear that you found it light-hearted and not strange. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 10/30/2011 1:47:48 PM Title: Chapter the Third
I really like how you're developing the relationship between them. Again, the way you're only using Marie's point of view, so that Logan's motives and emotions seem mysterious -- it's very intriguing. You do the angst really well, but this bit of foof has to be my favorite line:
“It’s not like we’re shopping for pink frilly things and rainbows,” Logan protested. “Camping gear, that’s manly shopping.”
Author's Response: I giggled a little when I wrote it.
[Report This]Date: 10/14/2011 8:17:15 PM Title: Chapter the Second
I really like how you describe Marie's mind/walls. It's such a common theme in fics, but you still made it seem fresh.
I also like the little Logan/Rogue moments! Keep it coming!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'll try.
Date: 10/09/2011 1:30:35 PM Title: Chapter the First
I like the start of this. Its a bit choppy but I really like the direction its flowing in.
Author's Response: Thank you. I never seem to be able to get things to flow smoothly so I just embrace the sops and starts.
[Report This]Date: 10/07/2011 2:54:53 AM Title: Chapter the First
Its been too long since Im really interested in a fic. I loved the way you wrote this, Maries POV is very sincere and real. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll definitely try to be fast on the updates. "Try" being the key word, of course.
Date: 10/06/2011 12:59:28 AM Title: Chapter the First
I love this perspective from Rogue...the catalog of tears...the complete exhaustion...solitude is freedom (that one, at least, I think she has in common with Logan). I am ever so anxious to see where this goes... --Wendie
Author's Response: Thank you. I hope I can give you a worthwhile story!
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2011 9:46:54 PM Title: Chapter the First
A truly great start...I am so interested to see where you go with these characters on their journey. I really like stories where you can't exactly figure out what Logan's thinking...it really makes you feel for Rogue and how she feels.
Author's Response: Thanks for your confidence. And review =) I want to really work on how Rogue feels so I don't want to be distracted by Logan =P