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Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2011 3:05:56 PM Title: The Doll

Your choice of chapter title is really intriguing--I didn't get it at first and actually had to go look it up (augh, my Spanish skills have diiiied). The cook's just as icky as Jose, isn't he? What a pair of horrible people. I really hate to think about what the two of them have been doing to Marie...

Author's Response: Oh, oops. I didn't even think about posting a translation. There'll be just a few more Spanish words and phrases, and I'll make sure to post a translation in the footnotes or something :). The cook is definitely kind of icky, but he ain't got nothin' on Jose. Trust me. God, poor Marie. I really am gonna write a story where she eats some chocolates and watches a Hallmark movie and eats a romantic dinner with Logan or something. I feel all bad for what I'm about to do to her LOL.

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