Reviews For The Private Dance
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Reviewer: Anonymous2004 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2012 5:12:13 PM Title: The Angel

Oh my lord. My eyes seriously teared up by the end of this chapter.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2011 7:02:46 PM Title: The Angel

*big watery sigh*

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2011 1:52:31 AM Title: The Angel

Ahh love xXx

Author's Response: :) so glad you're liking the story

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2011 7:01:50 PM Title: The Angel

ohh what an interesting story. I am very much enjoying it so far. More please!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking the story! More soon, promise.

Reviewer: Shuttlelauncher Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2011 12:56:25 PM Title: The Angel

Oh that made me cry!

Author's Response: Aw :(. I'm sorry it made you cry, heh! I wanted the story to be realistic, but ultimately hopeful. There's gonna be a pretty happy ending, promise.

Reviewer: Katya Jade Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2011 12:45:08 PM Title: The Angel

This is such a great balance of what makes Logan someone we love and think is such a jerk at the same time. You write both of them so well.

Author's Response: Thanks. Glad the characterization of Logan is working for you! Writing from a male perspective is a challenge for me, and I'm never quite sure if I get it right =/

Reviewer: doctorg Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2011 12:36:06 PM Title: The Angel

Yay! You're back! Now I'm going to be refreshing all day waiting for updates. :-) I'm glad they're talking about it. And poor Marie...I'm so glad Logan had good timing. Favorite lines:

I was afraid, he thought.

“I was an asshole,” he said.

And, sorry, but I can't help laughing at this...:

Marie,” Logan repeated, inhaling deeply, every exhale carrying a hint of a growl. He needed to stop that, or she was going to realize something was wrong with him.

...thinking that poor Marie probably thinks he's asthmatic or something. ;-)

Author's Response: LOL yep. This was what I meant when I said a 'different' characterization of Logan. Poor guy's kind of embarrassed of his animal side. Not to worry; I'm sure Marie will disabuse him of that notion in no time.

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