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[Report This]Date: 11/16/2011 9:55:18 PM Title: The Change of Rules
You are doing such a great job with this story...I like seeing Marie get a little bit of spark back, and it's cute how she can only do it because she thinks Logan is drunk. I like how she's taking charge, and poor Logan's fraying restraint is very sexy.
I really like how you're handling Logan's shame regarding his animal side. It's not overdone at all, just a natural assumption on his part that if she knows it'll change how she feels about him. And the little comments that hint at his damage, like this:
" Shit this good doesn’t happen to me."
I love me some damaged Logan. ;-) Now get writing, darlin'!
[Report This]Date: 11/14/2011 2:03:40 AM Title: The Change of Rules
*fans self*
That is so very, very hot.
Author's Response: Whew! That's a relief. I was kind of worried. It's freakin' hard to write smut from a male perspective! I seriously had to do some research and get some real-guy input for this one. Glad it turned out alright =D
Date: 11/13/2011 3:38:57 PM Title: The Change of Rules
i've been reading this as it was being posted and i have to say i love it. i wasn't sure whether i'd enjoy the set-up but i was pleasantly surprised (as a waitress for five years however i can tell you that young rogue is gonna have to toughen up with both her customers and her boss). that said, i'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this, and i really like this version of logan and marie. hobbits away, hey!
Author's Response: Pleasantly surprised? That's great! I was kind of worried, because I'm neither a waitress nor a stripper, but I tried to make the characterization as realistic as possible. Still, I was worried anyone who has worked in one of those two professions might read this and be like 'WTF stupid writer has no clue what she's talking about' haha. Thanks for the feedback, and let me know if I screw anything up ;P
[Report This]Date: 11/13/2011 10:08:26 AM Title: The Change of Rules
Totally hot and totally awesome.
"Green was his new favorite color."
Oh, I just bet it will be.
Author's Response: Heh. So glad you enjoyed. Thanks for always being an awesome reviewer, Katya!
Date: 11/13/2011 9:56:35 AM Title: The Change of Rules
I continue to marvel at your ability to use language. You can put in 600 words what would take me 6000. The way you are slowly building the connection between them is compelling. I want them to just go at it but you have me also wanting them to stop and sleep tonight and let the pull they fell towards each other deepen. Marvelous, just simply marvelous.
Author's Response: Thank you! But I think the short word count is because I kind of suck at describing things and generally fail to include vivid imagery of any kind LOL. And I hate to spoil the fun, but there will be more 'sleeping' than 'going at it' tonight. I see this more as a turning point for Marie, taking control of herself and her body, than any kind of real step in their relationship, y'know? But maybe I should shut up because that's going to become apparent in the next chapter or two =D