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Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2011 4:02:10 PM Title: The Intruder

I just want to say that I LOVE how frequently you update, and the quantity, too! :D Very happy person over here.

Author's Response: Yay, so glad to make you happy. The next update will be soon. I'm just a little nervous about it and want to get some feedback before I post it for you guys =D

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2011 1:20:25 PM Title: The Intruder

NOOOO! I hate when computers do weird shit and cause you to have to redo stuff. Ugh.

Ooh, protective Logan- WTH, Scott?? Barging your way into to Logan's room. Annoying!

Off to read the next!

Author's Response: Yeah, I think Scott just wasn't even thinking about how rude that was. Poor guy, and Jean too. I kind of made their characters oblivious, spoiled brats. Sort of like the X-Men: Evolution Jean and Scott. Haha!

Reviewer: WolvieDoesItBest Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2011 8:23:54 PM Title: The Intruder

Scott is such a turkey! Happy Thanksgiving!

Author's Response: Ha! Isn't he though. Poor guy; I think he realized his mistake the second he pushed that door open. Hope your Turkey Day was good too!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2011 7:38:23 PM Title: The Intruder

more more more

Author's Response: Gotcha. More. Now. Promise. Thanks for reviewing ;P

Reviewer: Tamana Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2011 5:59:03 PM Title: The Intruder

I want Logan :-/
And updates

Author's Response: I want Logan too. But the updates, that I can give ya ;). Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2011 3:40:17 PM Title: The Intruder

This is going to have a middle nine chapters? SQUEE, OMG, where do I send the chocolates?!

Love how Logan and Marie are finding their way forward with each other. Thank you so much, and Happy Thanksgiving. :)

Author's Response: Girl please, don't talk to me about food after yesterday. I'm gonna be living on frickin' V8 and Diet Coke for a week LOL. Pretty sure I drank my body weight in cabernet. I hope the story continues to be entertaining for you =D and hope you had a great Thanksgiving too!

Reviewer: Katya Jade Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2011 3:21:51 PM Title: The Intruder

And today I'm thankful for these chapters. Awesoooome! Happy Thanksgiving!

Author's Response: Aw thanks! I hope you had a good Thanksgiving too :)

Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2011 2:13:47 PM Title: The Intruder

Hooray for more chapters -- although so sorry to hear you lost some! That is just tragic. I agree with the previous suggestion of using Google Docs to back stuff up. It's good for beta-ing too.

Poor Logan, faking a hangover. I think I'll be as relieved as he is when he finally can come clean about his mutation. And, yum. I'm glad he's not being shy about showing his feelings. I suspect Marie will do enough of that for both of them.

Geez, Scott is a dumbass. I have a feeling he and Jean are going to cause a bit more trouble, interfering bastards.

Thanks so much for posting chapters, and especially for letting me know there will be a break before you post more. Otherwise I would be stalking this site all day. Happy Thanksgiving! Looking forward to more chapters tonight if you're able. And so glad to hear this is just the middle...I had no idea how long this fic was going to be, but I already know I don't want it to end ever!

Author's Response: I started playing around with Google Docs yesterday and must say that is great advice :). Thanks for introducing me to it! And I think Marie already strongly believes Logan's a mutant; she's just so scared to get her hopes up, that one. But don't worry; their mutie status is soon to be brought in the open, if in a kinda traumatic way. And I'm glad the story isn't seeming to long for you! I started typing and.... it just kept going.... and going.... haha! Hope you had a great Thanksgiving

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2011 1:51:55 PM Title: The Intruder

I am really surprised Logan didn't pop his claws at Scott especially with the way he feels about Marie. Humm, I am curious as to where the physical voice is going to come in, maybe Logan finds out who hurt Marie.

I have gotten to where I post all of my drafts to google docs so if I lose a version I at least have them there. We are in the home stretch on the cooking here, Have a great Turkey Day!

Author's Response: I think it was a close call, but he's so desperate not to scare her off he managed to hold them in. Poor guy :(. That is a good idea about Google Docs. Hope you had a great Thanksgiving!

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2011 1:46:35 PM Title: The Intruder

OOO!! I cant wait! I love this fic! Logan's hang over scene had me LOL. His Wolverine possessive loving of Marie in bed and then his protective aggression aimed at Scott was perfect! I am grateful for the update. Happy Thanksgiving atmd! 10+ stars for updating on a busy Holiday too ;D

Author's Response: Aw thanks! I hope you like the direction the story ends up going :). Things get dark for a little while, but there's definitely more growly possessive Logan to come.

Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2011 12:30:11 PM Title: The Intruder

I'd be so turned on by Logan right then. Sure, a little wary, naturally, but SO turned on. God...

Author's Response: Isn't possessive Logan just like, insanely hot? Guh.

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