Reviews For The Private Dance
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Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2011 2:38:56 PM Title: The Yes

Oooh, dominant Logan is back. HOT. ;) I love how he's nervous about her answer even as he exerts his (considerable) charisma and smokin'-hot smexiness (oops, did I say that out loud?) to convince her to stay with him. Also, the rubbing bit? Whimper.

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2011 2:29:41 PM Title: The Yes

That’s the best thing I ever felt in my life, darlin’.

::melts::

I say it all the time, but I really do love this story. And I'm sad there's only one more chapter for me to read after this. lol. You've captured it so well. The way they both just *feel* something for the other, but there's still the awkwardness, fear (of rejection, of being hurt, etc), nervousness, and vulnerability because they just don't *know* each other yet. Great, great story.

Author's Response: It's okay, you can say it as many times as you like ;). So glad you're enjoying the story. And I definitely agree with your analysis of Logan and Marie. They may not 'know' each other yet, but they know how they feel, and Logan at least is one to trust those instincts.

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