Reviews For The Private Dance
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Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 5:20:36 PM Title: The Souvenir

I LOVED this chapter. :D

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>>>It wasn’t like he was dragging her off to a cave to have his way with her. He just needed her to himself for a while, so he could prove himself to her and show her what a good mate he would make. He wasn’t sure if that was normal, if other men did those kinds of things when they found the woman they wanted.

Author's Response: Lol, I love instinctual, unsure-of-himself Logan too. I always see him as having these really neanderthal instincts, yet he understands that they aren't quite normal for the society he lives in, so he goes through all these mental escapades trying to justify his behavior to himself. It's pretty amusing.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 9:12:02 AM Title: The Souvenir

Why don't you find her right now to tell her...

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2011 10:52:27 PM Title: The Souvenir

Hee. Me Wolverine, me command you, as Sahara once wrote. So cute watching Logan's caveman side come out. Hey baby, you so feral, baby... ;D

Author's Response: His 'caveman' side is awfully endearing. Oddly enough, I think in some ways he's at his most vulnerable, emotionally, when he's being a complete neanderthal. It's fun to write :P

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2011 8:22:55 PM Title: The Souvenir

::melts::

He wanted to hunt for her and build a fire to keep her warm and bring home useless, pretty things just to make her happy.

Awwww, he can keep me warm and bring me useless, pretty things...but then that goes against my Rogan shipperyness. Damn. Lucky Marie.

Although I have to say that during this whole chapter I was basically yelling at him: "She needs your help! Go, go, go, go!!! Arrrrrrrgh!!! She's in a dumpster bleeding to death, damnit!"

....

Um, I promise I'm normal.

Well, relatively. ;)

Author's Response: LMAO. Great review, I love it. And yeah, I was pretty much yelling at him as I wrote it, "Damn it, Logan, you aren't gonna be able to bring her any useless pretty things if she's dead. Why'd you let her run off alone, you idiot?!" P.S. Normal is overrated =D

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