The last bit was incredibly sweet. You always think of Logan as the lone wolf (wolverine) but to see that he is happy she is there as he dies is wonderful.

Author's Response: Yeah, poor Logan. Thinking that the best he can hope for is to die in someone else's company. So glad he lives. ;-) Thanks for your review!

Go Marie!

As for Logan...NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

You wouldn't do that...you couldn't.....you can't!

Author's Response: Aw, of course I wouldn't do that. ;-) I forgot that my Rogan guarantee is not on this website. I usually guarantee 1. My stories will have angst.rnrn2. My stories will have smut (and Rogue will always be a consenting adult).rnrn3. My stories will have a minimum of spelling and grammar errors.rnrn4. There will always be a happy ending.rnrn5. I will never leave a story unfinished.rnrnI'm not sure how I'll get to the smut on this one (although I'm working on it) but all my other guarantees still hold!

Oh my goodness. Between you and atmd, I'm dying here.
There isn't a single thing I don't love about this story. Phenomenal. Award-winning. Everything was just so clear, so visual...
I hope Logan's ok.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much for such a lovely review! And I'm thrilled to be considered in such exalted company as atmd. Hope the subsequent chapters live up to the positive impression you have so far!

Aw, thanks for the dedication/apology. Neither one was really warranted, but hell, I'm greedy and won't say no =D.

Jesus Christ! A slap to his face and who the fuck would dare?

Okay, this made me grin ear to ear. I love how you've got us following Logan up into consciousness, kind of dazed and disoriented . . . I could really feel it as a reader.

This Marie is *awesome*. I love her hassling a half-dead Logan to get his ass in gear, and isn't he a cop? Can't he like, call for backup or something? Hahaha!

Aww oh my gosh. She was sweet, so painfully sweet. Poor Logan. I hope she gets him to the school. She seems like the kinda girl who knows how to get shit done.

You've left me with soo many questions here. I can't wait to find out more about Marie's backstory and how the hell she got sucked into this situation in the first place. Great writing, as always. And I can't wait to read the next chapter. (Um, and I mean, I literally can't, you evil tempter *sneaks off to Google docs*)

Author's Response: You deserve much more than that, but since I don't have book contracts to scatter at my disposal, you'll have to settle for a mention in the author's note. ;-) Yeah, I think it pretty much sums up this Marie that a.) She would slap Logan in the face and threaten to leave him there if she has to b.) That she would try to take him with her in the first place. In my conception she *is* tough, and she talks even tougher, but there is hopefully a sweetness to her underneath that will show up despite her best intentions of trying to act like she doesn't need anything or anybody. Feel free to pop into the Google doc any time...just be glad I haven't caught you there to hound you for advice!

I seriously lol'ed @ the first line of your an. Because I just finished horrible amounts of japanese homework and fell into bed, exhausted. Then proceeded to wonder if you had updated and blindly reached out for my cell on the nightstand after 5 minutes of wondering if I was too tired to check. look what won (you). So I'm so happy that there was actually a new chap to make up for the crazy amount of schoolwork. thanks!! ugh, I hate typing such long things on cells. Will give a better review next time- promise!!

Author's Response: Aw, what a compliment. I know exactly one sentence in Japanese, which is the most useless sentence ever. "Do you speak English?" (I won't even try to spell it out in Japanese). Which is ridiculous, because if they do speak English I could just ask in English, and if they don't then that's as far as the conversation goes, unless I want to point at random things and call them "kawaii." XD Thanks for leaving a review, as tired as you were and on your cell phone to boot!

Find a phone Marie, find a phone!!
We are obviously not near West Chester since Logan added the state when he told her where to go. The question is how long is it before Logan's 3 hours are up and the team starts to worry about him missing the rendezvous. He should be healed about the team they come looking for him. How ironic is that!

Logan's initial thoughts made me laugh. Who would dare wake him? Well I tell ya Wolvie, her name is Rogue and you won’t' ever be the same after this. :)

The plot twist about the suppression collar taking time to wear off is an interesting one that I don't think I have ever seen before. And that Marie would feel guilt about having to wait because her mutation wasn't active is characteristically Marie. I like it a lot. I wonder if she thought about it enough to bring it with them????

The last line was heart wrenching and beautiful all at the same time.

I hope this means that chapter's 5 and 6 decided to behave.

Author's Response: No kidding, not just wake him but to *slap* him awake? I can see how that would get his attention. I can tell you the suppression collar will play a very large role in what's to come. And chapters five and six put up a fight, but they got done. Chapter seven is being an outright motherf*cker, but we'll see.