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Date: 04/24/2012 7:29:44 PM Title: The Key
The bit where she pulls out the briefcase? Brilliant. They're both so pragmatic and clear-headed. It's quite impressive.
Author's Response: Yeah, I like the slow reveal of all the practical things Marie did while Logan was out. Put her gloves back on and put his leather jacket on to protect him, took the briefcase, brought the car around...she's quite street-smart. Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: 12/13/2011 5:39:24 PM Title: The Key
She shot him a look like he was crazy. She pushed up onto her knees, reaching over the console into the back seat, and hauled up a briefcase. His briefcase, in fact. Fifty grand in cash.
“I take it back. You’re a fuckin’ genius, kid.”
Smart thinkin', Marie! And can I just say, I am very, very glad Logan has two eyeballs again. Not that we wouldn't love him regardless, but, y'know . . .
As far as the writer's block goes, I dunno where you struggled, but it was worth it because I loved this chapter. So many interesting details, not to mention the building of some serious unresolved tension...
Plot tension, that is. Tension in the, um, plot. Yeah.
Really wondering where the leak came from and how Marco got the lowdown on Logan. I hope it's not betrayal within the ranks =(. Although if it did turn out to be, like, Ororo or something, that would be . . . interesting, to say the least.
Go Marie, asserting your adulthood in the face of Logan's stupid self-control mechanisms! She really is a genius.
Author's Response: :-D Yeah, usually Logan is the one taking care of business, I like the idea that Marie was out and doing useful things (bringing the car around, stashing the cash, covering up in Logan's jacket so he didn't accidentally touch her skin) while he was out cold. Tee hee. The struggle came with the next few chapters, so hope you liked those also. And yes, plot tension. That's always what I'm working towards. I don't have anything else in mind, at all. ::whistles innocently::
Date: 12/05/2011 12:21:20 PM Title: The Key
I don't remember if I have reviewed this or not but regardless it is good enough to review again. This chapter is really good. I especially like all of the touches of detail. I am also really enjoying the fact that although Marie must be really frightened, she is willing to do what needs to be done. I am really interested to see what their conversation entails.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! So glad you liked the chapter. I am glad to hear your description of Marie, that's exactly what I'm going for...she's not unfeeling, but she has learned to tough it out.
[Report This]Date: 12/04/2011 1:02:15 PM Title: The Key
I'm glad you didn't. I devour 5 chapters to find that you have writer's block??? Seriously???? You have to get past it. I need details woman!
Love how they are covered with gore, and still push through. I mean blood can be scary, even if you are mutant who heals.
Most of all, I'm proud of Marie. She may be shaky, but she's not gonna break. Go girl!
Now, you must write the rest!
Thanks,
-Pepper
Author's Response: Ha, thanks so much for the encouragement! Don't worry, I'm still slogging away, even though it's not coming easily. I love your assessment of Marie, that's exactly what I'm going for. :-D
[Report This]Date: 12/04/2011 1:42:47 AM Title: The Key
another awesome chapter, as usual! can't wait to see how logan's going to handle himself around her now he knows she's legal...hehe.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I think Logan has kind of known from the time he saw her in person that she's actually an adult, so...why is he trying so hard to convince himself that she is off limits? ;-)
Date: 12/04/2011 12:00:44 AM Title: The Key
YAY for kick-ass, fuckin' genius Marie!! Ooh, yeah. This is good. :D
And ::melts:: I just love a Logan who immediately feels drawn to Marie. So wonderful. And YAY for her being 22! So many good things happened in this chapter (not the least of which was the return of the eyeball because, to be honest, that was really squicking me out. ew). I LOVE this story. I think it actually might be turning out to be one of my very favorites. Stupid next chapters, causing trouble. Just Wolvie-claw them into submission. >:| lol, of course I'll attempt to wait patiently for them (the wait is definitely worth it). Doc O no kaku no wa honto ni sugoi yo!! ;P [Doc O's writing is truly great!!]
Author's Response: Aw...glad you liked it! And thanks so much for the Japanese compliment! Can I consult you if I have Logan trying to speak any Japanese in future? I will try to Wolvie-claw subsequent chapters. Or more likely just slog through them whether they're coming easily or not. ;_)
Date: 12/03/2011 6:50:07 PM Title: The Key
Great chapter! Loved how resourceful Mare is! Hope Marie saved that collar. It would make things easier for her with her skin. can't wait to see where you go next with it.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yes, the collar will definitely play a large role in the story. ;-)
Date: 12/03/2011 5:01:40 PM Title: The Key
Wonder how long Logan will keep his baser instincts in check now that he knows she's all grown up? Especially since I suspect that her 'enticing' and 'spicy' scent is a clue to the true nature of their bond, though neither of them has realized it yet. I hope your muse is more forthcoming than mine has been and forks over the necessary plot details sooner rather than later.
A credit card, huh? Guess you really do learn something new every day... --Wendie
Author's Response: Yeah, I think Logan has actually known she was "grown" from the time he saw her in person, but is trying to talk himself out of it. Hopefully for the smut prediction, he won't keep things in check for long. Yeah, I heard that credit card thing quite a while ago, but I can't say I ever tried it. Apparently duct tape or plastic wrap would work better, but in a pinch...reach for the AmEx.
[Report This]Date: 12/03/2011 2:26:09 PM Title: The Key
Now I'm really curious about that text message. Good chapter. I hope the writer's block clears up soon.
Author's Response: I hope I can make that plot point worthy of all the intrigue! Thanks for the review!
Date: 12/03/2011 12:39:34 PM Title: The Key
Awwww, that ending! I love this fic!! Fantastic job.
Author's Response: Hope you know that's just the ending to the chapter, not the whole story, right? Thanks so much for your review! So glad you liked it.
Date: 12/03/2011 11:57:05 AM Title: The Key
Yaaaaay! I'm not naive enough to believe everything's gonna be peachy for long, but I'm happy things got better for them. :)
Author's Response: Oh, of course I'm not going to give these two a moment's peace, right? But yes, they're both breathing and free, so that's something. Every little bit counts. ;-)
[Report This]Date: 12/03/2011 11:15:46 AM Title: The Key
Writer's block sucks. I'm struggling with it now. It's a good chapter, push on!
Author's Response: Aw, sorry to be sharing misery with you. Thanks for the encouragement!