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Reviewer: Emily Blackrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2012 7:48:33 PM Title: The Lead

Your description of what happened while she went through the memories was just gut-wrenching. Huzzah for Logan being there.

Author's Response: Yeah, poor Marie. Her mutation can be a curse in many different ways. She can gain immense knowledge, but at incredible cost to her. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: justanji Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2011 4:44:09 PM Title: The Lead

My heart was pounding during this chapter! I loved the way you wrote Rogue accessing "her" memories! Keep writing!
~Anji

Author's Response: Aw, thanks for the compliment! Glad you liked that -- it's a little different from how Rogue usually seems to "use" the personalities she's absorbed so I wasn't sure how it would go over. Thanks for the encouragement!

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2011 10:15:22 PM Title: The Lead

I still have this inch in the back of my head that a)Jubes and Kitty aren't with these guys and b)this is going to be bigger and maybe even hit closer to house that any of the X-men are preparded for.

Author's Response: I'm not tellin'. Thanks so much for your review!

Reviewer: atmd Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2011 7:25:12 PM Title: The Lead

Heh. I like tough, prickly Marie. You write her so well! It's gonna be funny if (when) Logan steps over the line and she puts him in his place.

Wow. That's a pretty slim lead, but better than nothing, I guess. I wonder what Logan will do with it.

This is turning out to be a great story, as always. You're like, incapable of writing badly, huh? I hope you've gotten over your writer's block, because I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you're liking this tougher, prickly Marie. I feel like I'm not settling well into the character, I keep wanting to make her all sweet and wobbly-kneed over Logan. :-) Speaking of next chapters....nah, I won't nag. Just know that I'm waiting. Not very patiently. ;-)

Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2011 6:05:58 PM Title: The Lead

X-men coming to the rescue! Take that you evil son of a bitches!!!!

I have to be honest, I usually go for fluffy, foofy, humorous fics because I need a good laugh or something...

But every now and then, a fic with beautiful character development like this one comes along that baits me and I'm stuck. (in a good way :)) Even foofy stuff won't help me unless I know what happens here. That just means you'll have me thinking up all these scenarios about what's happening with Kitty and Jubes and all the Rogan buildup until your next update.

Damn...

Thanks,
-Pepper

Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for the compliment! I'm so glad you're reading, and I hope that I can keep you hooked! ;-)

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2011 3:04:17 PM Title: The Lead

Wow. You wrote that amazingly (not surprised). I wish I could leave a more coherent review but it's been a rough couple of days. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter- it's getting me through horrible school stuff. :) Thanks!

Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry you've had a bad couple of days. Hope you're past that now. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, despite all your massive amounts of homework!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2011 10:55:06 AM Title: The Lead

I love that Wolvie thinks words like 'adorable' even if he wouldn't be caught dead saying them out loud. Well, not in public anyway.

I'm dying to know who is behind all this and I'm so looking forward to Logan making them pay oh so dearly for it. --Wendie

Author's Response: Ha, that's true, I don't quite see "adorable" coming out of his mouth. As to who is behind it all...it'll be another couple of chapters before you find that out, but I'll try to keep you entertained in the meantime.

Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2011 10:29:17 AM Title: The Lead

>>>Her voice was wobbly again when she spoke. “What if we can’t find them? What if they’re just...gone?”

He couldn’t suppress the growl that welled up from his chest at the thought. “We’ll find them. And we have help.” He squeezed her against his side. “I think it’s time for you to meet my friends.”

Author's Response: :-D Does that mean you liked that part? Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2011 10:49:58 PM Title: The Lead

LOVE this story! Always so excited to see an update! Glad Marie is though through this. She is a survivor to her core. She might have moments of vulnerability but she has a core of strength in her. Love how you show it here.

Author's Response: So glad you're liking it! I'm glad that Marie is coming across as strong-but-vulnerable. That's always what I'm going for, but I think in the last story I went too far to the weak side, and in this one I've been worried at times that I went to far to the prickly/bitchy side. :-D

Reviewer: Katya Jade Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2011 10:07:08 PM Title: The Lead

Loved the description of Marie calling on Freddy's memory. Logan is going to turn these guys into shish-ke-bob.

Author's Response: Glad you liked the memory-recall scene...wasn't sure how that would fly, it's a little different from how Marie usually seems to have access to memories in other stories. Thanks, as always, for your wonderful reviews!

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