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Reviewer: Emily Blackrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2012 9:01:41 PM Title: The Wall

Marie's panic was riveting. I felt everything closing in on her, drowning her, trapping her. Quite intense.

Hope she's not off being foolish. Accept the love, Marie. ACCEPT!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I had no idea when I started the chapter that she would have a panic attack, but it just seemed to happen. And of course she's off doing something foolish! ;-) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2012 10:58:49 PM Title: The Wall

Ahhhhhhh! How does this just get better and better????

Loved this chapter! Ooh, is Marie gonna do something a little more hands on to hurt those who hurt her? Can't wait for more! This was my treat for getting about halfway thru a chapter of my thesis. :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're liking it! Marie is definitely going to get more hands-on, but it may not go the way she expected. ;-) And congrats on your thesis chapter!

Reviewer: WitchBaby Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2012 11:15:57 PM Title: The Wall

love the complexity of your rogue. i've been in similar positions where you want something so bad one second and then the next you were wondering what the hell you were thinking. the need to run, escape, protect can become overwhelming at times. like 1 step forward, 2 steps back. i can't wait to see how things go between rogue and the prof, then her and logan, so excited!!! another *amazing* chappie, as always, please update soon!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you are liking Marie's character development. To be honest, I had no idea that she was going to have that panic attack, it just happened. ;-) Glad you're excited, hope the next chapter lives up to your expectations!

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2012 10:49:00 PM Title: The Wall

Nice update. Logan is soo cute when he has a surprise. You can just tell he is fighting what he feels for her, he doesn't understand it or want to see it yet. I am not sure that Marie will gain much by going to Charles, he isn't going to let her run, even if she wants to.

Oh BTW, I can't wait for Owen's gift to drop some really good tidet about either Marie or Logan. It doesn't have to be the obvious but knowing he is going to come out with something grand just makes my little heart flutter.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Yeah, enthusiastic Logan is pretty cute, isn't he, just because it's so out of character. And by now you'll know what Marie requested of Charles...let me know what you think of it! As for Owen...I strongly suspect he is going to pop up again in the future.

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2012 10:26:13 PM Title: The Wall

our girl's about to do something foolish, isn't she? (grins) still enjoying this... hobbits away, hey!

Author's Response: Always! I try not to make the characters do anything hopelessly stupid, I hope, but as for...impulsive? reckless? short-sighted? self-defeating? Bring it on!

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