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Date: 04/24/2012 10:13:22 PM Title: The Symphony
SUCH an action-packed chapter. So many things going on!
I absolutely loved how you described the metal singing to her and the different tone each kind of metal had. I love the title chapter. =)
I really liked Marie's conversation with Owen. Not only is it foreshadowing the danger to come (is it foreshadowing when it's so obvious?), but reveals that despite how hard she tries to convince herself she doesn't care about anyone, she's leaving in order to protect them all. Really wonderful.
Author's Response: So glad you liked it! Owen is pretty creepy, isn't he? Yeah, poor Marie. I think she's being pushed away by both internal and external forces, but a lot of them definitely have to do with protecting Logan and the mansion.
Date: 03/12/2012 7:54:43 AM Title: The Symphony
Fantastic. I am always eager for more of this.
~Mia
Author's Response: So glad you liked it. Thanks so much for reviewing, as always, Mia!
Date: 03/08/2012 6:54:35 PM Title: The Symphony
While we all love reading your updates, go study!!! Good luck! Looking forward to reading more when you have a chance to write!
~Anji
Author's Response: Yes ma'am. :-D Thanks for reviewing, Anji!
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2012 2:59:26 PM Title: The Symphony
Oh no! Im caught up! More soon please!!! This is a fantastic story, I just cant put it down.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Not sure if I'll get one more chapter in before my big deadline or not, but I'll try! At worst, in two weeks I'll be back to regular updating.
Date: 03/07/2012 12:59:26 AM Title: The Symphony
Okay, this was probably my favorite chapter so far. My stomach's doing somersaults, wondering what will happen. Love it!! Can't wait to read more!
Hope the studying is going well!!
Author's Response: So glad you liked it! Thanks for your review. THe studying is...going. ;-)
Date: 03/06/2012 5:39:11 AM Title: The Symphony
How dumb am I? I didn't realised you've already wrote another chapter when I left my review for the previous one.
Well, what can I say? Where in the hell she's going? Does she know about Erik's plans? Is there something else?
She should dread Logan'wrath, LOL!
I'm so happy they found Jube and Kitty. Jube is always the best!(Nice night for a swim, AH!).
I'm a bit confused about Etik's voice in her head saying my love, my betrayer...
Last thing...go back to study, you crazy fool, LOL! Thanks for this, but keep studying, we do not want a bad exam on our conscience!^^
Author's Response: Hi there! Sorry, I seem to be unwittingly cryptic in this story. I'll answer whatever questions I can. For some reason, I really like the backstory of Erik and Charles as former lovers, and that's why Erik in her head sees Charles and says, "My love, my betrayer." I don't have a good sense of what happened to them, but obviously they had a falling out, and I think Erik would have trouble understanding why Charles would choose a more high-minded path over their friendship. And by now you probably know that you're right, she's running because she knows about Erik's plans, and that he would stop at nothing to get her now that he knows she can power his machine. She also knows that Wolverine would try to protect her but is powerless against Erik, and doesn't want to bring that kind of trouble down on the mansion now that she has befriended the people there. Add in her general "issues" with intimacy/emotional connection, and you've got a runner!
Date: 03/06/2012 4:22:57 AM Title: The Symphony
You go back and study; shoo! It's a decent enough chapter, but it'S a good story - don't waste it on unbalanced emotionalism and and on writing that doesn't flow. You can do better when your mind's immersed with your characters (excellently constructed in previous chapters). Except that, as we know, you are stuck in the quagmire of impending-exam-preparation. Go study, luv!!! If you need a break, go for a run, not to your computer. If your mind needs a break, daydream of Rogan. That'll help with your stoy. LATER. Says bancáinte, who should edit a thesis and beta another story. :-D
Author's Response: Ouch. I am duly chastened. Your comments are insightful...I was actually trying very hard to convey a level of panic and urgency in Marie's thoughts, but obviously I went a little too far. Although...go for a run? You've obviously never met me. ;-) Thanks for your review, even if it stung a little...happy thesis-editing!
Date: 03/05/2012 7:01:39 PM Title: The Symphony
While I am overjoyed that Marie was able to box up Eric and they have found Jubilee and Kitty (nice drop in line by Jubes btw) what is chasing Marie???? I am going to have go back and see what could be chasing Marie. She might know what Erik has in mind and that is why she is running or is there something else?
Marie has no idea how PISSED Logan going to be.
Author's Response: See, you had the right idea all along! Yes, she got a glimpse of Erik's plans, and knows that he would stop at nothing to get her now that he knows what she can do. Thanks so much for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 03/05/2012 4:08:48 PM Title: The Symphony
Cliff-hanger. I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: So glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing!