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Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2012 10:21:35 PM Title: The Apology

Loved Marie coming to terms with her feelings and laying all her cards on the table when she thinks Logan's out of commission. And Logan playing possum--perfect! I love LetsHimselfGetCapturedToRescueHisGirl!Logan!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it...I knew I had made the character so damn dysfunctional that it would need a pretty significant change to make a relationship between them believable, but I wasn't sure how having her say it out loud would fly. Having her say it mostly to herself, not knowing if Logan was hearing or not, seemed like the most realistic medium. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Emily Blackrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2012 10:48:17 PM Title: The Apology

Finally some progress in the right direction! By which I mean, less torture. =P But I realize it is important to the story so I won't reprimand you too severely. I'm very pleased that Marie has come to realizations about her actions and has embraced the truth. She's acknowledging what is important to her and accepting it. Lovely chapter.

Author's Response: :-) Yes, these characters really balked getting to a certain place in their relationship...but I think I'm FINALLY getting them there. And having Marie realize she has to let her guard down and let Logan in is an important part of it. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2012 1:33:44 AM Title: The Apology

Rescue mission!!!!

Eek, can't wait for more!!!!!

Author's Response: Yup yup! :-D Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2012 10:08:11 PM Title: The Apology

Okay. I want to have your babies now.

~Mia

Author's Response: Aw. I do make cute babies. You'll just have to settle for my chapters, though. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Syrin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2012 7:53:40 PM Title: The Apology

As always, magnificent! I'm so excited to read what happens next! Did Logan hear all that? What she said? : ) And hey! Thanks for the shout out! You rock!

Author's Response: Doh! I just saw I spelled your screen name wrong. Sorry! It's fixed now. :-D

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2012 7:40:00 PM Title: The Apology

Dun dun dunnnnn. ;)

I sense explodey things in the immediate future! I loves me some explodey things. Ooh, and who's going to take down Sabretooth, Marie or Logan?

This wasn't too talky. You have to show Marie's internal journey before the reader can accept a change of heart, right?

Thinking good thoughts for your results. I bet you nailed it.

Author's Response: Oh, there's no putting anything past you! Sorry there wasn't much explode-y, but hope you liked the next chapter anyway. And I'm glad you found the internal journey appropriate and not too boring. Thanks for the good thoughts, and the review!

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2012 7:18:18 PM Title: The Apology

Moooooooooore! lol

Author's Response: :-D Thanks for the review! Hope to get back into regular weekly updates!

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