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Date: 05/20/2012 8:20:46 PM Title: The Plan
I think the action was excellent. It felt fast-paced and exciting but was still easy to follow.
Author's Response: So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reviewing. :-)
Date: 05/09/2012 10:27:16 PM Title: The Plan
You did a great job with this chapter. I could totally see the action and escape clearly in my mind's eye. It's always good to see Logan taking charge too. It was great seeing Kitty make an appearance as well.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. I was honestly worried that Logan was too take-charge in this (or rather than Marie was too passive), but he did have a plan and she had just promised to trust him, so it really doesn't make sense for her to try to impose her own will on the situation. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 04/30/2012 12:30:21 AM Title: The Plan
Oh man, that was good. I love how you incorporated the stabbing (and yet not stabbing). I'm soooooo looking forward to reading the next chapter!!! It would be a lovely break from all the silly formatting I have to do to my image list, glossary, and bibliography... ;)
Author's Response: So glad you liked it...is this your thesis you're formatting? If so, good luck! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 04/29/2012 9:18:30 PM Title: The Plan
Oh hell, thank you so much for this. I love it. I promise to adore it and support it in muse times and in drought...
~Mia
Author's Response: So glad you liked it! Thanks as always for your very sweet reviews!
Date: 04/29/2012 12:31:13 AM Title: The Plan
You snuck this one in on me and I missed it until today! This one was short but sweet, I am betting Marie has got some talking to do before we get to the smoochin'. Are we up for a POV change? I would love to know what is going through Logan's mind right now.
Author's Response: Ha, didn't mean to be sneaky! And you're right, there's some talking to be done, but then smutty goodness will follow in short order. :-) Interesting point about the POV change...right now we're staying with Marie, but I do need to get back to Logan again. I think even with Marie's POV the next chapter will let you in on Logan's thinking a little bit, though. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 04/27/2012 10:25:45 PM Title: The Plan
OMG! I hate it when you end a chapter that way. I cant wait to read more. The moment between Logan and Marie, where he holds her and whispers her name...very strong. A favorite Rogan moment. More soon please! 10+
Author's Response: Sorry for the chapter break, but I'm so glad it left you wanting more! And that I was able to provide you with a favorite Rogan moment. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 04/27/2012 9:41:29 PM Title: The Plan
hi, know i haven't reviewed in ages but wanted to say i'm still really enjoying the story and that i loved this chapter. it was easy to follow straight to the point, not to mention you got my girl kitty in there. kudos, looking forward to the rest. hobbits away, hey!
Author's Response: Hi there! No worries about not reviewing if it means your time has been spent writing! Glad you commented on finding this chapter easy to follow, I was worried that the whole phasing action scene might be a little convoluted. Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/27/2012 8:26:37 PM Title: The Plan
Eeep! I really like pace. Very exciting! Keep going...keep going! : )
Author's Response: So glad you liked it -- thanks so much for the review!
Date: 04/27/2012 8:20:23 PM Title: The Plan
ohh i suspect some wild sex next... Or maybe its just a fervent hope. lol Great chapter.
Author's Response: Well, we may still have a chapter in between, but then there will be smutty goodness in short order, so keep your hopes up! Thanks for the review.