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Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2012 8:57:07 PM Title: The Scarf

Again...whoa. I need to open a window...turn on the fan or something. DAMN.

Author's Response: :-D So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for your review. Hope you cooled down...eventually. ;-)

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2012 8:17:59 PM Title: The Scarf

wonderful as always. know what you mean about our favourite couple being sex-mad: you leave them alone for two minutes and BAM! (Literally, in this case). enjoyed this chapter anyway, keep up with the story;-)

Author's Response: :-) Glad you liked it. Yes, I definitely didn't expect it, but it retrospect it make sense that Logan would want to prove that her skin doesn't matter in a very hands-on way. He's just that kinda guy. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Syrin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2012 10:00:32 AM Title: The Scarf

I think it's so sweet that Logan won't let Marie change their relationship because she can't touch. She needs it! Girl is hella stubborn! Part of the reason he loves her, I bet! : )
Can't wait to read more! It's so fun to read such a well written story!

Author's Response: Yeah, sometimes Logan's bossiness can be downright endearing, can't it? Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Melancholy Rogue Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2012 12:06:15 AM Title: The Scarf

Well, for someone who finds smut hard to do, you sure do it well. lol :)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2012 9:33:36 PM Title: The Scarf

Hot. And somehow adorably wonderful at the same time. Glad he knew just what he needed. *snicker* ...in more ways than one...

Author's Response: Aw. Thanks so much for the review! Yep, Logan is quite the good Samaritan here, isn't he?

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2012 8:47:26 PM Title: The Scarf

I don't know if it is because you found this chapter easier to write but this chapter "feels" more...right between the two of them than the last one. I don't know if you wanted to put tension in the last chapter so that we could feel the time ticking away in the back ground but that's kind of what it felt like for me. This one has a distinctly different flow... it has a greater need but gives me a feeling of greater connection between the two of them.

Author's Response: Ha, I don't actually think this was easier to write, but I'm glad you liked it. Last chapter...I'm not sure if it was time tension or just the amount of stuff that had to get fit in around the sex -- making sure Logan knew she chose him, the whole birth control thing, the whole "first time" / trust thing -- but I can see it not flowing so well. This one...well, in this one I was worried that Logan was being too "dominant" -- interrupting her, forcing her out of her comfort zone. I didn't want him to seem like a bully. But then again, if anyone were to get on my case about a dominant Logan, it probably wouldn't be you. ;-)

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2012 7:59:25 PM Title: The Scarf

wow... that was sexy. glad Logan showed Marie that her skin isn't a problem for him. Just need some imagination lol Awesome job on this one!

Author's Response: So glad you liked it. Thanks so much for your review! Yes, I obviously hadn't anticipated that the two of them would be gettin' it on again, but it does kinda make sense. Logan is a physical guy, and he would pretty understandably balk at the idea of Marie keeping herself away from him, especially since a little pain never discouraged him much. ;-)

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