Reviews For The Merchandise
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Syrin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2012 9:25:06 PM Title: The Visitor

Poor Logan, finding out about ST. But they are so sweet together. And now, dun dun DUN....he's back! Oh, no!

Author's Response: Yeah, I guess some family really is worse than no family at all. I'm glad you liked the interaction between the two of them. Thanks for reviewing! :-D

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2012 8:44:03 PM Title: The Visitor

Oh no!!!! These two just cannot cath a break, can they????

Great update! Looking forward to more after that cliffhanger!

Author's Response: Yeah, it's one damn thing after another for these two, isn't it? I have to write a story some day when they both just lie on the beach all day, sipping margaritas, to make it up to them. ;-) THanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2012 12:11:53 PM Title: The Visitor

You are early! Yay!! I really love the banter between the two of them if the first part of the chapter. The second half was interesting because you made it a great balence in Logan keeping his temper and Marie realizing she will tell him anything even if he scares her. Victor is soooooo dead. :)

Author's Response: :-D Yeah, action is SO much easier than smut to write, once I got back into it I was cruising along. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2012 8:52:57 AM Title: The Visitor

Well hell's bells, honey. You certainly do give nice little adrenaline bursts. It complements your nanoseconds of discussion and relaxation really well. I love the line about clean, fed and healthy at one time.

~Mia

Author's Response: Yeah, it's amazing when you really look at the story. Except for the "three weeks later," it really only covers about four days, and the two of them never get a damn moment of rest. :-) At least I gave them a few minutes this chapter...

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2012 12:50:34 AM Title: The Visitor

Wha...!!!

Author's Response: I know, right! LOL. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2012 11:35:33 PM Title: The Visitor

wow. so calm and Bam! Action. You sure know how to end a chapter! Great job. Loved the chapter.

Author's Response: So grateful for your review, because that was exactly what I was going for. A little tranquil moment, and then Sabretooth bursts onto the scene. ;-) Thanks again for reviewing!

You must login (register) to review.